Wanjai Anjir Posted June 27, 2024 Posted June 27, 2024 (edited) Boguslav_Damir There was a teenager named Boguslav Damir . He was born on 19/06/1995. He had a disharmonious family. At that time, Damir came home from school and Damir heard a very loud sound. Damir immediately went to check on him, but he was hit by a broken plate thrown by his father while he was fighting. He went to his grandmother's house to calm himself down. Damir ended up staying at his grandmother's house. A few months later, Damir was 18 years old. Damir often listened to his father and mother. From the past until now, Damir still fights, and he doesn't care what happens at home. Damir is also often teased by his school friends. Damir heard that his father and mother wanted to divorce. He was asked. who to follow, but Damir prefers to be at home alone and not follow anyone who is ready He was given by his grandfather a motorbike to chain Damir to. Then he met people with the sa me fate as Damir and his friends. Damir and his friends looked for an empty house that was suitable to live in until finally Damir met his uncle who was the leader of a motorbike club. Damir was taken care of by his uncle and Damir was offered to stay. at his uncle's hangout but Damir refused because Damir had friends who slept on the street He met his uncle when his modher and father died damir Migrated to las barancas and he met his uncle when he met a dude who was in the same boat his him and damir worked hard for everday live because Las Barancas is a remote village and the are many robbery He asked his uncle if he could bring a friend. His uncle said it was okay. Damir rushed to his friend at a place where he was sleeping together. A few weeks later, Damir was told by his uncle that his grandparents had died. Damir and his uncle rushed to the grave of his grandfather and grandmother. Damir heard of his grandmother's departure. Damir's grandfather felt sad and hopeless. Damir could only pray for grandmother and grandfather to calm down. Damir is now starting to grow up and has lots of friends and he becomes a motorbike kid with his friends and the one who leads is Damir himself. Damir is a kind and smiling person He often helps orphans and gives a little money to people who can't afford it and Damir was shocked by the death of his uncle, Deablo Lucas. Damir was very sad and his uncle's club had disbanded because his uncle had died and his uncle's hangout was used by Damir for him and his friends. to sleep together and finally Damir is not lonely because he already has many friends. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Alexeder Account Forum yang saya miliki: Wanjai Anjir Saya Wanjai Anjir selaku pemilik account UCP Alexeder bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Boguslav_Damir) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited June 28, 2024 by Wanjai Anjir
apples1344 Posted June 27, 2024 Posted June 27, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Wanjai Anjir Posted June 27, 2024 Author Posted June 27, 2024 Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Ya Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 6 bulan - 1 tahun Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Buat baru Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Di rumah
apples1344 Posted June 27, 2024 Posted June 27, 2024 1. Lengkapi dan perbaiki formulir CS. "Account UCP yang saya miliki" dan "Account Forum yang saya miliki" belum di-isi dengan benar. 2. Nama karakter belum ditulis di CSnya. 3. Belum dijelaskan bagaimana Damir akhirnya bisa tiba di San Andreas. 4. Format paragraf belum justify. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. 5. Jawab dengan jujur, apakah cerita ini dibuat menggunakan AI?
Wanjai Anjir Posted June 28, 2024 Author Posted June 28, 2024 6 jam yang lalu, apples1344 said: 1. Lengkapi dan perbaiki formulir CS. "Account UCP yang saya miliki" dan "Account Forum yang saya miliki" belum di-isi dengan benar. 2. Nama karakter belum ditulis di CSnya. 3. Belum dijelaskan bagaimana Damir akhirnya bisa tiba di San Andreas. 4. Format paragraf belum justify. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. 5. Jawab dengan jujur, apakah cerita ini dibuat menggunakan AI? 1 sudah 2 sudah 3 sudah di bagian 2 paling bawah 4 sudah 5 sama sekali tidak memakainya coba di cek lagi min itu dah saya edit lagi
apples1344 Posted June 28, 2024 Posted June 28, 2024 Tolong diperhatikan lagi "Account UCP yang saya miliki", isi dengan akun UCP yang kamu miliki.
apples1344 Posted June 28, 2024 Posted June 28, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Wanjai Anjir, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @apples1344 JG:RP Helper Team
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