madafucka22 Posted June 23, 2024 Posted June 23, 2024 (edited) Carvallo_Agramon There used to be a boy who was born in Mexico, Pueblo in a remote area that could be called a village, named Carvallo Agramon, in 1998 he was born and he lived with his parents, then he wanted to grow up, he carried out his daily life helping his father and mother , but with this process he also became a delinquent, he used to live in a place that he might call delinquent.but in this way Ralphie was very devoted to his father and mother, with him wanting to know about the wider world in the future but he was stopped by his father himself, his father found out he was naughty, finally his father kicked him out of his house. Then he was picked up by a group of gangs who didn't know the name. He grew up there, he knew the meaning of a gang and an understanding of gang associations.He grew up with a group of naughty people but he was also naughty, he He can be kind to someone but he can also be mean to everyone, with so many people in the gang being reluctant to Carvallo, but Carvallo remains with his stance that he is not allowed to do anything that he shouldn't do, there are many rules for entering the gang, but Carvallo tries to made peace with himself when his family had kicked him out, but by kicking him out of the house. Carvallo remained someone who knew the rules of being there, being there couldn't possibly be enough to be naughty, Carvallo still had to be able to manage his life if he was no longer a houseboy. like before, he was an adopted child and now he was taken in by a group of gangs, and the gang also had a big name, but that way he tried to be like his father, he got married and he had children, and his father and mother realized that the child he threw away ended up being children who have families too. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/313932-cn-ralphie-oakley-to-carvallo_agramon-madafucka22/ Account UCP yang saya miliki: hanya madafucka22 Account Forum yang saya miliki: madafucka22 Saya madafucka22 selaku pemilik account UCP madafucka22 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Carvallo_Agramon) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited June 23, 2024 by madafucka22
$Honey7$ Posted June 23, 2024 Posted June 23, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
madafucka22 Posted June 23, 2024 Author Posted June 23, 2024 (edited) 1. Tidak, sebelumnya sudah ada, Karakter saya yang baru berganti nama nya dengan yang baru ini min. 2. 1-3bulan min 3. Baru melakukan change name min kebetulan. 4. tidak 5. tidak 6. diwarnet min @Honey7 Edited June 23, 2024 by madafucka22
$Honey7$ Posted June 23, 2024 Posted June 23, 2024 Perbaiki beberapa penggunaan huruf kapital pada CS anda, ada beberapa awal kalimat yang harusnya itu huruf kapital, malahan tidak digunakan.
$Honey7$ Posted June 23, 2024 Posted June 23, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @madafucka22, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Honey7 JG:RP Helper Team
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