Revaldo Syahputra Posted June 17, 2024 Posted June 17, 2024 UCP Name: DevilJin Old Character: Sebastian_Santacruz Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/255167-sebastian_santacruz-deviljin/#comment-2474256 New Character: Nemiah_Pennington Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United Kingdom Reason for name change request: mengganti origin dan nick Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti /myid Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Sebastian Santacruz is someone who has known crime from a very young age, he was born in an environment that was not suitable for children in general to live in. Sebastian is often invited to commit theft, robbery and murder. he often does this because he needs money to survive. One day at the bar, Sebastian was invited by Ziel to do bad things like insult people, Sebastian thought about it and nodded to accept Ziel's invitation. They went out of the bar and got into the car and Ziel invited Sebastian to harass people in the Tample area. The two of them set off, while on the road they talked about what they would do later. When the two of them were close to the area, they immediately got out of the car holding bats. Sebastian shouted at Haston loudly for all his money. Sebastian continues to force Haston to give him all his money. However, Haston laughed at Sebastian and Ziel. because they were hitting with bats. Sebastian and Ziel were angry because Haston laughed at them. Sebastian pulled Haston's hoodie in anger. Haston also calmed Sebastian down so he wouldn't do violence to him. Then Sebastian pushed Haston hard and Haston took his Glock 17 which was on his waist. Sebastian ran as fast as he could because he saw Haston taking out a firearm. When Sebastian ran he was shot in the leg and stomach. He fell and lay limp, Haston quickly dragged Sebastian into the trunk of his car so that no one saw what happened. Haston also took Sebastian to a distant and safe place to throw Sebastian away. While Haston was on the road he saw the police who were suspicious of him. But the police ignored him, when Haston arrived at the distant and safe place. Haston opened the trunk of his car and lifted Sebastian out of the car. Haston dragged Sebastian into the thick grass so that no one would see Sebastian's body. Haston covered the body with cloth and grass waste then left CK Screenshots: Bukti
$Yukii10$ Posted June 17, 2024 Posted June 17, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Revaldo Syahputra Posted June 17, 2024 Author Posted June 17, 2024 18 minutes ago, Yukii10 said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Salah rampok / malak duit orang berakibat kena tembak 5. Sudah
$Yukii10$ Posted June 19, 2024 Posted June 19, 2024 Pending, berikut beberapa point pending SS an dari /myid dan /mp kamu silahkan diganti ketika karakter kamu sudah di jail secara IC. Pada bagian story CK, silahkan perbaiki lagi, tanda baca, paragraf serta format rata kiri kanan (justify) pada semua paragrafnya.
Revaldo Syahputra Posted June 19, 2024 Author Posted June 19, 2024 2 jam yang lalu, Yukii10 said: Pending, berikut beberapa point pending SS an dari /myid dan /mp kamu silahkan diganti ketika karakter kamu sudah di jail secara IC. Pada bagian story CK, silahkan perbaiki lagi, tanda baca, paragraf serta format rata kiri kanan (justify) pada semua paragrafnya. Done @Yukii10
$Yukii10$ Posted June 19, 2024 Posted June 19, 2024 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
Matchalattee Posted June 20, 2024 Posted June 20, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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