pending Fred_Eastwood [Jozy]

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Fred_Eastwood

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Among the glittering city of Detroit, a child was born named Fred Eastwood, Fred was born in Detroit, 10 June 1997 from father James Eastwood and mother Vinny Eastwood. When he was a child, Fred was like a child in his age, he was very cheerful, happy, carefree. However, his parents didn't pay much attention to him, his father was always working and rarely came home, every time his father came home he would vent his emotions to mother.
 

Because of all that, Fred in high school changed completely, he became a very bad person, bullying, fighting, gangster activities, illegal drugs transactions, Fred did it all in high school. Because of Fred's bad attitude, and his father who continued to act aggressively, Fred mother, Vinny Eastwood, was found hanging herself in her room, and because of that, Fred was very sad and devastated, he was drunk and going crazy, he had a lots of loans to survive because his father left him alone.
 

After that all, Fred began to realize life and leave the bad gangster life behind. When he graduated from high school, he started work hard without stopping, to pay off the debt he had, he often helped people in need. Fred dream is to become a normal office worker whose needs are met. But, because he has a lot of debt, he is having trouble and constantly thinking about his debt.
 

Long story short, Fred was free from all his debts, thanks to the help of his father, James Eastwood, because his father felt guilty for not educating Fred well, and always scolded his mother everytime he came home from work. Fred was very grateful to his father for paying off all the debts he had. Because his name in Detroit is hard to fix, Fred flew to a city called Los Santos, starts a new life and hopes for a beautiful life.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 

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Saya Gratio Palendeng selaku pemilik account UCP Jozy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Fred_Eastwood) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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1.Tidak
2. 3 tahun lebih
3. Buat baru
4.Tidak
5.Tidak
6.Dirumah

 

Edited June 7, 2024 by Gratio Palendeng

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Tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan jujur.

• Apakah ada UCP lain yang kamu mainkan selain UCP ini?
• Kamu bermain dimana? ( Rumah atau Warnet )
   

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2 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan jujur.

• Apakah ada UCP lain yang kamu mainkan selain UCP ini?
• Kamu bermain dimana? ( Rumah atau Warnet )
   

1.Tidak
2.Rumah

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buru buru min aku bikinnya, jadi banyak cacat

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Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Gratio Palendeng,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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Sudah ya min @Ariqfadhil24, sudah saya revisi total.

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Saya ajukan pertanyaan terakhir coba jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu mengerjakan Character Story menggunakan bantuan AI?

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saya jawab dengan jujur, saya membuat cerita ini sendiri dalam bahasa indonesia, saya mentranslate cerita yang saya buat ini ke bahasa inggris lewat google translate, dan saya tidak pernah menggunakan program AI.

 

Edited June 8, 2024 by Gratio Palendeng

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Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Gratio Palendeng,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team