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Immanuel_Crooklyn


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     Immanuel Crooklyn was born on June 4, 1997 NewYork, Los Angeles. Immanuel was born into an upper-middle class family, but his parents really loved Immanuel because Immanuel was the only child in his family. Immanuel's family experienced problems in their business, both of Immanuel's parents went bankrupt. When Immanuel was a teenager, Crooklyn and family moved to Los Santos for a place that would allow them to thrive. Immanuel's father worked as a truck driver to pay for Immanuel's young family to attend Horace Mann School.

 

  During his school days, Immanuel often skipped school, got into fights, and also started consuming drugs. As a result of his bad behavior at school, Immanuel got several rivals at school who made him have to fight every time he came home from school. Immanuel also made friends with several other criminals near where Immanuel lived. Idlewood is a very vulnerable place, or you could say very dangerous to visit. It was not difficult for Immanuel to make friends in the area because they had the same place of origin before Los Santos.
 

  Immanuel and his friends were involved in the nightlife which resulted in Immanuel getting a letter from school because he often didn't go to class, Immanuel's parents couldn't do anything about it. Immanuel became even wilder after he was expelled from school, he started making his own money by robbing, selling drugs, and whatever he could do to survive on the streets. Immanuel does this activity every day to show himself to all his friends that Immanuel is capable of living on the streets, and after he had been robbing for a long time, Immanuel started thinking about joining a gang in the Los Santos area called Ganton. After that his economy began to improve because buying and selling illegal goods was quite profitable for him.

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 


 

Saya Vo4G selaku pemilik account UCP Vo4G bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Immanuel_Crooklyn) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited 42 minutes yang lalu by Vo4G
 

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 


 

Saya Vo4G selaku pemilik account UCP Vo4G bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Immanuel_Crooklyn) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited by Vo4G
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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

    edit.png

     

 

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang lebih 1 - 3 bulan )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di warnet)
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Tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dibawah ini dengan jujur.

  • Apakah ada UCP lain yang kamu mainkan selain UCP ini? Tidak
  • Kamu bermain dimana? (Warnet)
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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Vo4G,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Hapus border hitamnya, jangan gunakan border.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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1 jam yang lalu, Ariqfadhil24 said:
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Vo4G,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Hapus border hitamnya, jangan gunakan border.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

Tidak tau min, tiba tiba ada aja, dan sudah dicoba hapus tidak bisa, malah ceritanya yg ke hapus.

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15 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Coba kamu hapus atau dicoba saja, usahakan tidak ada bordernya.

Sudah bos, cek kembali

Posted
10 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Saya ajukan pertanyaan terakhir coba jawab dengan jujur, apakah kamu mengerjakan Character Story menggunakan bantuan AI?

Tidak bos, dari otak ni

Posted
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Vo4G,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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