Byantara Nadif Ardana Posted June 5, 2024 Posted June 5, 2024 (edited) Emiliano_Ramirez In 24 October 1999 in the city of Plueda, a man named Emiliano Ramirez was born, Emiliano grew up in a criminal environment so that Emiliano was not surprised to see illegal activities at his place, when Emiliano was 5 years old, Emiliano's father died due to a drug overdose, finally Emiliano and his mother moved to Emiliano grandfather's residence, there Emiliano started school and had a good friend named Ronald, Emiliano and Ronald often play together, even though they are both in the same class, the environment in his grandfather's area is rural so it is far from criminal, although there is but not much like Emiliano previous home environment, there Dwayne apart from often playing with Ronald. Emiliano also likes to help his grandfather in the fields, so Emiliano has little knowledge about agriculture.One day, when Emiliano was 15 years old, coincidentally in his grandfather's area there was a high school, Emiliano finally attended the school, and Ronald also followed Emiliano to the school, finally they were both in the same class again, at the school Emiliano saw a very beautiful and charming girl, it seems Emiliano fell in love at first sight with the girl, not long after this incident, Emiliano became acquainted with the girl, her name was Vauziyah, a very simple and innocent girl, and that was the reason why Emiliano fell in love, so Emiliano started approaching the girl, and Emiliano's school days were very enjoyable because of the presence of a girl.It doesn't feel like 3 years have passed, Emiliano will soon graduate from school, during Emiliano's graduation celebration, he took the time to chat for a while with a girl he liked for the past 3 years, Emiliano expressed his love for 3 years of school and every day every time he meets him, unexpectedly it turns out that the girl has also been waiting for Emiliano for 3 years, and this moment of celebrating school graduation was very enjoyable and meaningful for Emiliano. One year passed, Emiliano daily life after graduating from school was helping his grandfather to farm in the fields, and this year will be a very sad and touching year for Dwayne, it turns out that Emiliano wants to wander to find his identity and a bright future for him. This week was the last Sunday Emiliano met Ronald, who was Emiliano closest friend and already considered Emiliano like his own brother, at the same time, today is a farewell day for Dwayne and his girlfriend, day after day Dwayme spends on his family and his, girlfriend, which today is Dwayne's farewell to all his family, the atmosphere is very broken, Dwayne's lover cries uncontrollably about Emiliano leaving, Emiliano promises to come back and bring good news to all the Dwayne family, all of Dwayne's family ended up taking Dwayne at the airport and Dwayne went straight to Los Santos, and in the end the best gift was a memory.. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/311576-cn-fajar_byan-to-emiliano_ramirez-byanganteng/ Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Byantara Nadif Ardana selaku pemilik account UCP Byanganteng bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Emiliano_Ramirez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited June 10, 2024 by Byantara Nadif Ardana revisi keseluruhan cerita
Jeypamungkas12 Posted June 5, 2024 Posted June 5, 2024 BACA DI BAWAH INI! Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)
Byantara Nadif Ardana Posted June 5, 2024 Author Posted June 5, 2024 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Namechange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. kadang di Warnet kadang di Rumah,jadi bisa dua duanya,akan tetapi lebih sering di warnet karena di rumah saya meminjam laptop.
Jeypamungkas12 Posted June 6, 2024 Posted June 6, 2024 PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
Byantara Nadif Ardana Posted June 6, 2024 Author Posted June 6, 2024 baik min akan saya edit secepatnya dan menghapus plagarism.
Byantara Nadif Ardana Posted June 6, 2024 Author Posted June 6, 2024 saya sudah ubah 100% min,dan saya sudah check plagarism 100% ke arah unique, mohon dicek kembali min,terimakasih. sorry for tag: @Jeypamungkas12
Jeypamungkas12 Posted June 7, 2024 Posted June 7, 2024 Harap di perbaiki : Paragraf 2 dan 3 tambahin kata kata nya sedikit. Enter setelah paragraf jangan terlalu berjarak.
Byantara Nadif Ardana Posted June 7, 2024 Author Posted June 7, 2024 apakah sudah sesuai min? sorry for tag; @Jeypamungkas12
Jeypamungkas12 Posted June 9, 2024 Posted June 9, 2024 Ubah keseluruhan cerita, jangan membawa wabah covid dalam Character Story!
Byantara Nadif Ardana Posted June 10, 2024 Author Posted June 10, 2024 sudah min, @Jeypamungkas12 dan sudah saya cek 100% unique,0% plagiarism
Jeypamungkas12 Posted June 10, 2024 Posted June 10, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Byantara Nadif Ardana I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Jeypamungkas12 JG:RP Helper Team
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