Vannoval Posted May 19, 2024 Posted May 19, 2024 (edited) UCP Name: vannoval Old Character: Drake Tobleron Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/115590-drake-tobleron-vannoval/#comment-1102223 New Character: Desmond Massimo Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Italy Reason for name change request: Mencoba Roleplay Baru dengan identitas baru Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti Screenshot OOC Jail Spoiler Screenshot /myid Spoiler Screenshot /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler On Saturday, Drake Tobleron, who's taking a break from work and recuperating at home following surgery for a gunshot wound to his left arm, suddenly hears his phone ringing while he's asleep, Drake tries to get up and stand, grabbing the phone from under his pillow, then answers the call. It turns out his friends are on their way to his house to meet up, After answering the call, Drake walks towards the living room to wait for his friends to arrive. A few minutes later, Sermon and Severe arrive at Drake's place. They all sit down in the living room and chat about their plans for the day off. Drake suggests getting some food first since he's feeling hungry. Afterward, Drake gets ready and heads to Palomino with Sermon and Severe to find the nearest restaurant. They arrive at Palomino restaurant, then order some food and drinks while chatting. Sermon Garcia then asks about Kamikura Asa, Drake Tobleron's wife, why she's not at home, Then Drake mentions that Kamikura Asa often leaves while he's asleep, and it's been happening quite frequently. After hearing this, Severe tries to lighten the mood by joking that he's meeting someone important, and Sermon continues the joke by asking if there's anyone more important than Drake, Because Drake is not feeling well, he can't control his emotions very well. So, the joke makes him upset, and he tries to call his wife, Drake talks loudly, making his friends confused, and they try to calm him down, Drake tells his wife to come home and meet to discuss the issue they had earlier. After calling his wife and finishing their meal, they leave the restaurant to continue their journey. As they are about to discuss their destination, Sermon asks about their plans for the holiday, asking where they are headed, Drake says he needs to go home to resolve the issue with his wife, but before going home, he asks to stop by the place where he usually buys items and one knife, They agree and escort Drake home to resolve the issue with his wife, After arriving home, Drake realizes his wife hasn't come back yet. He calls her in an irritated and angry tone to ask where she is. After a while, Kamikura Asa arrives and meets us in the yard where Sermon and Severe are sitting. They ask her how she's doing, Kamikura Asa answers Sermon and Severe's questions, then turns to Drake Tobleron, who stays quiet. Drake responds briefly and asks Kamikura Asa to come inside for a private chat to discuss the problem. Kamikura explains that she left without permission because Drake was asleep, so she didn't say goodbye. However, feeling upset, she accuses Drake of things while he was out of town. She claims he doesn't know what Drake was doing while away, so she thinks it's reasonable for her to meet her friends to avoid boredom. The argument continues until Drake becomes angry and walks towards the kitchen to grab a knife. Because Kamikura Asa is used to this, she thinks Drake is just threatening her as usual, Kamikura Asa keeps talking and challenging Drake, who is holding a knife, until she says she's fed up and tired of living with him, expressing her desire to separate from Drake. Drake, who's upset, becomes angry upon hearing this and swings his right hand holding the knife towards Kamikura Asa, causing her to fall. Then, he points the knife at her and says he'll grant her wish to separate from him, but he decides to kill her because he doesn't want his wife to be with someone else. Drake kills his wife by stabbing in the upper abdomen, causing her death and blood to splatter. Then, he attempts to calm down, and the sound of Drake's phone ringing is heard, Drake answers the call from his friend Sermon, who's outside with Severe. Sermon asks if everything's okay since they've been waiting for a while. Drake tries to calm down and responds, but Sermon's persistent questioning makes Drake lose his temper, and he responds loudly, confusing his friends. Drake tells them to wait outside, but Sermon and Severe insist on coming in. After hearing that, Drake swiftly moves Kamikura Asa's body to the bathroom, laying it there and covering it with black plastic. He then cleans up all the blood from his body and the floor where he killed his wife. Then, the sound of footsteps on the stairs is heard. Drake hurries back to the living room, finding Sermon and Severe already there. He tries to remain calm and engage in casual conversation. However, when Severe asks about Drake's wife, he claims she's asleep. Hearing this, Severe becomes suspicious, knowing Kamikura Asa wouldn't sleep without informing her friends. Severe attempts to find Kamikura Asa. When he opens the toilet door, he notices black plastic covering the bathroom, which makes him suspicious. Removing it, he discovers Kamikura Asa's body, He shouts, accusing Drake of murdering Kamikura Asa. Severe rushes towards Drake and delivers a blow to his stomach, causing him to collapse. Drake tries to get up and runs towards the exit. Sermon and Severe run after Drake into the parking lot. Drake hops into Kamikura Asa's parked car, attempting to drive away. But before he can start the engine, Sermon arrives and delivers a blow to Drake, dragging him out of the car, causing him to tumble. Severe strikes Drake's face, and Sermon thrusts the knife he's holding, resulting in Drake's instant death. CK Screenshots: Bukti Edited May 19, 2024 by Vannoval Perbaikan spoiler image
$RaySan$ Posted May 19, 2024 Posted May 19, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Vannoval Posted May 19, 2024 Author Posted May 19, 2024 (edited) 32 minutes ago, RaySan said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Dibunuh, akibat membunuh istrinya sendiri. 5. Sudah Edited May 19, 2024 by Vannoval Perbaikan Reply
$RaySan$ Posted May 19, 2024 Posted May 19, 2024 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
Ooxy Posted May 20, 2024 Posted May 20, 2024 Setelah di /autocn harap diperiksa kembali dari segi nama, origin, dan gender. Jika ada kesalahan PM Forum.
Ooxy Posted May 20, 2024 Posted May 20, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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