ariqfadhil24 [CN] Tyrell_Dremonte to Ruiz_Mañuelos (cakcop)

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UCP Name: cakcop

Old Character: Tyrell_Dremonte

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/270821-tyrell_dremonte-cakcop/?do=findComment&comment=2627703

 

 

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New Character: Ruiz_Mañuelos

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United State of America

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin berroleplay dengan character development baru

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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./myid

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/mp

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/mp

OOC Jail

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CK Story:

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   Tyrell Dremonte is a former Law Enforcement Officer, he's an Ex San Andreas Police Department (SAPD) officer, Dremonte has served the state of San Andreas for approximately 2 years, Dremonte is known for his great dedication within the black community he is also known for making a lot of enemy on the job. After being discharged in 2023 Dremonte is living a miserable life, he always drinks, he doesn't care about himself but he decides to work as a Private Investigator Dremonte has received over 100 cases, and his job description was to locate stolen goods, missing person, finding relatives and more. Using Dremonte's experience he completed all of his cases with a perfect result, In December 2023 he also became a consultant for homicide case in Ohio.

   On Febuary 5th 2024, Dremonte notice a fake painting being auction, dozen of fake painting and art was sold at the auction and he decide to alert the Federal Agency and also investigate the scamming by himself, but after a few days the Federal Agency decide to take Dremonte into custody with reason "Interfering with official bussniess" while he's being interrogated by the Federal Agent Dremonte explain that he didn't mean to Interfer he told the Federal Agent that he was a Private Investivigator and was hired by his client to find prep, after the Federal Agent confirm the story the Agent decide to work the case together with Dremonte and Dremonte agree with the proposal, after conducting investivigation for almost 2 month Dremonte finnally found a suspect and he decides to not alert the Federal Agent yet, he wants to confirm his evidence, Dremonte decide to buy some of fake painting from the suspect auction house and decide to take the painting to the arts expert, Dremonte bought a replica of Starry Night painting made by Vincent Van Gogh, and after confirming his suspicious he then hands all the evidence and the name of the suspect to the Federal Agent, after having the suspect arrested and was taken to custody the suspect was confirm to have affiliation with Russian Mobster and confessing that he's working for the Russian Mob to sell and create a fake art.

   After the case is clear, Dremonte realize that he might have a bounty on his head for messing with the Russian Mob but he doesn't care, he decide to continue his self-destructive life, while waiting for another case, everynight Dremonte always pass out because he was to drunk and the next day he always do the same thing, he will go to Dilimore bar and spend the rest of his night and returns to his apartment and drink more alchol, at April 23th Dremonte still doesn't have any case so he wake up and drive to the Dilimore, while driving to the bar Dremonte realize that there's Black Voodoo is following him but he ignores it, he then continue to drink a few bar in Dilimore bar he also order a steak that night, after finishing his fifth beer he decide to returns to home and as he checking on his rear-view mirror he notice that the Black Vodoo still following him, Dremonte then drives away from the Bar and shortly after Dremonte stop his car and decide confront the driver, at the time Dremonte is drunk and he walks to the Vodoo driver side door and starts shouting at the driver, after a few minutes the Black Voodoo left without saying a words, the next day Dremonte repeat his daily life activity and while he's on his way to go back to his apartment he got rear ended by a car at light stop, he then confront the driver but then the driver the car step out and pull his weapon on Dremonte and starts shooting, after got shot Dremonte lays down on the ground and he smiles. The shooter decided to leave the scene immediately, turns out the driver was a hitman sent by the Russian mobster.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[$Liner7ner$]

1. Sudah.
2. Sudah.
3. Sudah.
4. Terbunuh karena menggangu bisnis suatu kelompok yang berbahay.
5. Sudah.

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Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

1. Screenshot OOC Jail, /myid dan /mp diberi tanda.
2. Pada CK Story, jarak antar paragrafnya cukup 1 spasi saja.

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Edited

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Link gambar yang /myid di ganti dengan imgur, tandanya taruh di luar spoiler, seperti tanda OOC Jail, /myid dan /mp serta itu paragrafnya spasi antar paragrafnya masih jauh.

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6 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Link gambar yang /myid di ganti dengan imgur, tandanya taruh di luar spoiler, seperti tanda OOC Jail, /myid dan /mp serta itu paragrafnya spasi antar paragrafnya masih jauh.

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Itu di CK screenshot ada screenshot OOC Jail.

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13 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Itu di CK screenshot ada screenshot OOC Jail.

Fixed

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Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.

[Ooxy]

Review, tolong perhatikan sebelum "/autocn" pada bagian nama, origin, dan gender. JIka terdapat kesalahan tolong PM forum saya, terimakasih.

[Ooxy]

On 28/4/2024 at 10.15, Liner7ner said:

New Character: Juan_Hernandez

 

Famous name, silahkan ganti.

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9 hours ago, Ooxy said:

Famous name, silahkan ganti.

Ruiz Mañuelos

[Ooxy]

4 jam yang lalu, Liner7ner said:

Ruiz Mañuelos

Edit dulu yang nama sebelumnya.

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1 hour ago, Ooxy said:

Edit dulu yang nama sebelumnya.

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