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[CN] Alan_Woodyard to Edgar_Pedroza (Pamplemousse)


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UCP Name: Pamplemousse

Old Character: Alan_Woodyard

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Edgar_Pedroza

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

Mengganti character development untuk roleplay kedepannya.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail

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/myid

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/mp

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CK Story:

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In the old days, Alan Woodyard was a huge star in the Gravel Dawgs, the hard-bitten motorcycle club that ruled the east side of town. But he had moved on from those times. He attempted to escape that life by taking a regular job at an auto repair shop in the hopes of moving on from his history.

Alan committed a mistake back when he was with the Gravel Dawgs, and it finally caught up with him. He chose to play with a young person from the rival gang's neighborhood in an attempt to prove that his gang was the best. He believed that by intimidating this child, who wasn't even in a gang, he would demonstrate the strength of his group. Thinking that this would send a message to the rival gang, he shoved the child aside in a half-dead state.

 

However, there was a limit to playing about with children. Families and children were forbidden, and this infuriated both his gang and the opposing gang. Even within his own team, this deed of his left a negative mark on him.

The Gravel Dawgs disintegrated after a number of years. Though Alan believed he could start over, some things are not easily forgotten. The rival group desired to even the score because they were still aware of what he had done. They thought Alan had betrayed the moral code of the streets by doing something that could not be justified.

 

Alan was locking up the store one evening when two people from his previous life came up to him. It didn't matter to them that he had evolved or that he regretted his previous behavior. Anger and painful memories erupted during a brief altercation. Alan attempted to calm them down by explaining that he had changed, but they were not interested in conversing.

Alan was left alone in the parking lot as the encounter came to an abrupt end and his life began to fade.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
1 minute ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

 

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. Perebutan wilayah turf dengan tindakan yang terlalu berlebihan

5. Sudah

Posted
11 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

  1. Screenshot OOC Jail, /myid, dan /mp dipisah dan diberitanda.
  2. Coba cari nama lain, nama "Luis Giron" famouse name, bisa cek "Luis Giron"

 

1. Sudah diedit, terima kasih himbauannya

2. Edgar_Pedroza

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