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[CN] Travone Lynch to Maxence Lemieux (trojans)


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Posted (edited)

UCP Name: trojans

Old Character: Travone Lynch

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Maxence Lemieux

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: French

 


Reason for name change request:

Mencoba Roleplay Baru + Menghilangkan Crime Record

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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Screenshot OOC Jail

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Screenshot /myid

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Screenshot /mp

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CK Story:

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Travone Lynch, a troubled man who was looking for peace amidst the hustle and bustle of Los Santos, found himself entangled in the crime network that gripped the city, making him have to temporarily leave the city leaving his flock to return to Finland for a while. Upon Travone's return to Los Santos, he already found that he had lost information related to his former flock. The place he used to live together has now changed and is no longer recognizable as before. Apparently a sign that his association had been wiped out by the problems he faced in the past.

With his criminal record in the city of Los Santos, Travone has difficulty finding a proper job to continue his life from the problems he has faced. This forced him to find his way back to the dark side to survive. Travone is looking for a tenant to live temporarily around where he used to work, around the Red County - Blueberry area, with the intention of finding his old connections who are still there today.

However, it did not go as expected, instead of meeting his old friend, Travone met his old rival from a long time ago. The situation became awkward because it met in very unexpected conditions, at a pizzeria where Travone used to eat with his friends, but now the restaurant seems to have been owned by his rival's connections. Situation changes when the person sees Travone and approaches him, a conversation ensues between the two of them, Travone's instincts begin to feel suspicious, this person's motives seem unclear, his actions seem to have an ulterior motive. Ignoring the warn signs, Travone forged ahead, money and survival clouding his judgment.

The person did not seem to know him, acting like he needed a worker, Travone was asked to work to help deliver goods from a local factory to a place, carrying a truck, making transactions, delivering goods, receiving money, then returning to the factory to finish the job, but that was just Travone's mind. Emotions boiling over, waves of pain, Travone's world fades away instantly, he is framed and betrayed, the person recognizes him and deliberately makes Travone trust him, this is where Travone breathes his last, a victim of the wild unconquerable streets of Los Santos.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Edited by kunfaz
Another French Name
Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
6 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

 

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. Dendam & Pembunuhan

5. Sudah

  • $jiee$ changed the title to [CN] Travone Lynch to Maxence Lemieux (trojans)
Posted
4 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said:

Pending, berikut beberapa point pending

  1. Namanya France nya coba cari yang lain, ini hampir mirip dengan "Raymond Lemieux" perbedaannya dikit dengan "Vaemond Lemieux".

 

 

Changed to Maxence Lemieux.

Posted

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.

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