ooxy [CN] Luther Calvinston to Christopher Bione (RaySan)

[$RaySan$]

UCP Name: RaySan

Old Character: Luther Calvinston

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/289531-luther_calvinston-raysan/?do=findComment&comment=2827636

 

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New Character: Christopher Bione

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin memperbaiki Character Devlopment

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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/myid

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/mp

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CK Story:

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One day there were two friends who were going out together, the two people were Himura Sutsujin and Daquan Yozora. On the way, something happened that the two people didn't want, Daquan was robbed and shot by the robber which resulted in Daquan's condition dying and critical. Then Himura took Daquan to the nearest hospital, namely ASGH. Arriving at ASGH, Himura knocked on the Emergency Room door and shouted for help from the Paramedics who were in the Emergency Room at that time. Then Luther Calvinston came to open the door to Himura. Luther saw Himura's panicked face, then Luther asked Himura to calm down and took Daquan to the operating room.

When the operation started, Luther asked Himura to leave the operation room and asked Himura to wait outside. Himura came out and waited for the operation which lasted for several hours while praying. Several hours had passed, Luther, with a worried and panicked face, who had tried his best, could not save Daquan's life because the wounds on his body were too many and too serious. Finally, Luther came out of the operating room and said to Himura that his friend could not be saved. Himura at that time was very shocked and disappointed that what Luther had done was not optimal. Finally, Himura left the hospital. Luther, feeling sad and disappointed, finally cleaned up the operating room and handed it over to the MED officers to finish the body.

Then Luther went to the Locker Room to rest because that day Luther felt that it was the unluckiest day for him because he couldn't save one person. Luther took a short break and went to the basement to get his car and went to eat at a nearby restaurant. When they arrived at the Dount Restaurant, Luther entered and was immediately shocked. Luther met Himura again and Himura asked why Luther's face was so shocked. Himura, with a heart that still hurts, still doesn't accept Luther's very poor performance, in the end Himura shoots Luther in the head until Luther dies.

 

CK Screenshots:

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[Ooxy]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[$RaySan$]

4 minutes ago, Ooxy said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. Pembunuhan karena balas dendam

5. Sudah

[Ooxy]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.