$aryaaaa$ Posted March 29, 2024 Posted March 29, 2024 UCP Name: eternlatake Old Character: Drake_Warren Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/303478-drake_warren-eternlatake/#comment-2988229 New Character: Edgar_Suarez Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Mexican Reason for name change request: ingin ganti origin Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti /myid /mp /jail CK Story: Spoiler Drake Warren or what he can call Raven was born on September 17 1998 in the USA, Texas, he lives with his parents. Raven grew up in simple circumstances and also likes to see motorbikes every day because his father works as a motorbike mechanic. He has a dream to continue his father's work as a motorbike mechanic and also wants to open a new branch in another area besides where he comes from. Another time, when Raven was older, he migrated to the Los Santos area. he opened a new mechanic there. Another story is that when Raven had a new branch in that place, he bought his dream motorbike, namely a Harley. In another story, when Raven was relaxing after waking up, he took the time to go on a long trip somewhere. He took the equipment to go far away to get tools and equipment. While he was smoking in his garage, he took the time to check the condition of his motorbike. Feeling safe, he took the time to buy snacks for the road later so he wouldn't stop too much. When he had bought snacks, the motorbike that Raven had brought suddenly broke down even though Raven had checked it this morning before he left, when he saw someone he didn't recognize approaching him. Raven was very happy that there was someone who might be able to help her and it turned out that person asked Raven to stay away from that place. Raven didn't know and said innocently that the place was a public place. So it could be for everyone and Raven didn't know that this person mistook Raven as the person the unknown person was looking for and started pointing his gun at Raven. and Raven, stupidly, told the person that the gun didn't have any contents or that the gun was a toy. And the person asked if Raven wanted to try the bullet? Raven wasn't afraid. And Raven didn't realize that the gun was a real gun and Raven lay dead because he was shot twice by that person. and sadly Raven. Raven was left to die slowly by that person. CK Screenshots: Bukti
$Sobersanta$ Posted March 29, 2024 Posted March 29, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$aryaaaa$ Posted March 29, 2024 Author Posted March 29, 2024 18 minutes ago, Ariqfadhil24 said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1.sudah 2.sudah 3.sudah 4.Drake mogok di tengah jalan dan memasuki theritory orang yang tidak ia kenali 5.sudah
$Sobersanta$ Posted March 29, 2024 Posted March 29, 2024 7 hours ago, aryaaaa said: Drake Warren or what he can call Raven was born on September 17 1998 in the USA, Texas, he lives with his parents. Raven grew up in simple circumstances and also likes to see motorbikes every day because his father works as a motorbike mechanic. He has a dream to continue his father's work as a motorbike mechanic and also wants to open a new branch in another area besides where he comes from. Another time, when Raven was older, he migrated to the Los Santos area. he opened a new mechanic there. Another story is that when Raven had a new branch in that place, he bought his dream motorbike, namely a Harley. In another story, when Raven was relaxing after waking up, he took the time to go on a long trip somewhere. He took the equipment to go far away to get tools and equipment. While he was smoking in his garage, he took the time to check the condition of his motorbike. Feeling safe, he took the time to buy snacks for the road later so he wouldn't stop too much. When he had bought snacks, the motorbike that Raven had brought suddenly broke down even though Raven had checked it this morning before he left, when he saw someone he didn't recognize approaching him. Raven was very happy that there was someone who might be able to help her and it turned out that person asked Raven to stay away from that place. Raven didn't know and said innocently that the place was a public place. So it could be for everyone and Raven didn't know that this person mistook Raven as the person the unknown person was looking for and started pointing his gun at Raven. and Raven, stupidly, told the person that the gun didn't have any contents or that the gun was a toy. And the person asked if Raven wanted to try the bullet? Raven wasn't afraid. And Raven didn't realize that the gun was a real gun and Raven lay dead because he was shot twice by that person. and sadly Raven. Raven was left to die slowly by that person. Di buat 3 paragraf dengan 300 kata dan tambahkan screenshot OOC Jail.
$aryaaaa$ Posted March 30, 2024 Author Posted March 30, 2024 17 hours ago, Ariqfadhil24 said: Di buat 3 paragraf dengan 300 kata dan tambahkan screenshot OOC Jail. don @Ariqfadhil24
brainfreeze52 Posted March 31, 2024 Posted March 31, 2024 @aryaaaa Periksa kembali Name dan Origin sebelum /autocn.
brainfreeze52 Posted March 31, 2024 Posted March 31, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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