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[CN] Galvez_Collazo to Ezequildo_Saavedra (KARLoconner)


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UCP Name: KARLoconner

Old Character: Galvez_Collazo

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Ezequildo_Saavedra

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Mexico

 


Reason for name change request:

Karena karakter sebelumnya sudah pernah mengikuti sebuah faction. Lalu saya ingin mengikuti Roleplay / masuk kesebuah faction yang berbeda dengan Origin Mexico dan nama yang berbeda.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail:

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/myid:

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/mp:

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CK Story:

Spoiler

       Galvez Collazo, is a young man living in the west-side city of Los Santos. He is affiliated with a group of similarly Hispanic people led by a leader commonly referred to as 'the king'. Collazo got along well with them, and ran a business selling burritos and workshops. March 6, 2023 - They got the bad news that their king was dead. A threat was made to all the rivals to find out who was behind the assassination, but the SAPD managed to stop the bloody and fiery chaos, which ended up with all Hispanic members including Collazo being arrested and put in prison. In prison, Collazo met his twin brother Chavez who was in prison for a different case. Collazo told him what happened before, including the death of the king. They felt disappointed about it, and planned after getting out of prison to burn down the west-side, where Hispanics lived.

       11 years later, their plan failed because Chavez disappeared without any news after gaining freedom from prison. Collazo tried to forget all about it and tried to live a simple life. One day, when Collazo was trying to buy clothes at a store, he accidentally saw a murder on TV. Collazo saw the news very clearly that Chavez was the victim. Moments later, Collazo was called by an unknown man to meet him somewhere because he knew Chavez's true whereabouts. When Collazo arrived at his destination, he was confronted by a white American. He tried to ask for information about the Hispanic-gang, but Collazo was upset because Chavez aka his twin was not around, he felt cheated. Collazo swung the crowbar at the man's head until it bled, but Collazo did not kill him. Once Collazo was satisfied, he tried to return. However, without Collazo realizing it, the person got up and fired a shotgun at Collazo's head. Collazo's head shattered after that and died. It turned out that the person was a bitter rival of the Hispanic-gang 11 years ago who tried to kill one by one the Hispanic people including 'King' and Chavez.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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