$BoulJembul$ Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 (edited) Braulio Eberardo Braulio Eberardo or you can call “Raul” from Mexican, he born 13 August 2000, when Raul was little He has a father who is the leader of a motorcycle gang, his father wanted the Raul become a member of a motorbike gang like his father. One day his father had a problem with his rival, and his father did a pull up to his rival, While he was shooting, his father got hit on his chest and head, that make his father dying, Raul lives alone without his parents, he has to work hard to survive, Raul also has a grudge with his father's rival, then he finds his father's weapon, and Raul learns how to shoot every day because he wants revenge on his father's rival. When Raul was an adult he worked hard in a restaurant, he worked to get food every day, But when he was working in a restaurant, suddenly there was a gang that was having a shoutout with his rivals. He didn't feel unfamiliar with one of the gangs, but when he remembered it, the gang that had a shoutout with his father, he came home from work and take his "Glock-43X", then he approached one of the gang members and took revenge by shooting one of the gang members in the head, he felt addicted and started to like the criminal world, when he joined a M.C Gang in Los Santos which turned out to be a gang that had a M.C Gang rival who killed his father, then Raul's gang intended to pull up his rival, Raul was impatient because it was the gang that killed his father, the day came that Raul and his gang came to Rival Hood then shot the member in an explosion of anger, and the member of the rival died and Raul was satisfied with what happened to his rival. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/300794-cn-david-dasilver-to-braulio-eberardo-rafipeliharaangw/#comment-2963343 Account UCP yang saya miliki: rafipeliharaangw Account Forum yang saya miliki: @cilukba046 Saya cilukba046 selaku pemilik account UCP rafipeliharaangw bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Braulio Eberardo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited March 11, 2024 by cilukba046
$Chelland$ Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$BoulJembul$ Posted March 10, 2024 Author Posted March 10, 2024 1. Tidak 2. 6 Bulan - 1 Tahun 3. Namechange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Dirumah terkadang juga suka main di Warnet.
$Chelland$ Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 8 minutes ago, cilukba046 said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Edit 2 bagian diatas dengan UCP dan Account forum yang kamu miliki.
$BoulJembul$ Posted March 10, 2024 Author Posted March 10, 2024 @ChellandBagaimana min? apakah sudah benar?
$Chelland$ Posted March 11, 2024 Posted March 11, 2024 Masih ada AI terdeteksi, terutama pada parapraph 1 dan 2. Saya kasih kesempatan terakhir untuk ubah bagian itu terlebih dahulu.
$BoulJembul$ Posted March 11, 2024 Author Posted March 11, 2024 @ChellandSudah saya edit min, bisa di cek kembali apakah sudah terdeteksi AI?
$Chelland$ Posted March 11, 2024 Posted March 11, 2024 Tolong jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan JUJUR! Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu miliki Dimanakah kamu bermain (Rumah / Warnet)?
$BoulJembul$ Posted March 11, 2024 Author Posted March 11, 2024 UCP : rafipeliharaangw Main biasanya di rumah tetapi juga kadang main di warnet kalo di ajak temen
$Chelland$ Posted March 11, 2024 Posted March 11, 2024 Saya akan mengejukan pertanyaan terakhir, dijawab dengan sangat JUJUR! Apakah kamu menggunakan AI saat membuat Character Story ini ? Apakah kamu meminta bantuan orang lain saat membuat character story ini ?
$BoulJembul$ Posted March 11, 2024 Author Posted March 11, 2024 Saya tidak membuat Character Story ini dengan AI saya tidak meminta bantuan orang lain untuk character story, ini pure saya buat sendiri
$Chelland$ Posted March 11, 2024 Posted March 11, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @cilukba046, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Chelland JG:RP Helper Team
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