Revaldo Syahputra Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 UCP Name: DevilJin Old Character: Vicente_Delacruz Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/251529-vicente_delacruz-deviljin/#comment-2446536 New Character: Emiliano_Dieguez Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Mexico Reason for name change request: Kurang bagus namanya Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti /myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler Vicente was a criminal from the age of 13, when he joined a gang in Mexico. One day he was involved in a robbery at a clothes shop, food shop and other shops with 3 members of his gang. When they robbed the food shop, the police saw the robbery of Vicente and his 3 members. They all rushed into the car and ran from the police. After a few hours, Vicente managed to escape from the police with a lot of money. they all partied at the usual place, many women only wore underwear and panties. One day, as usual, Vicente abused people passing by in his area. Vicente met a woman and asked for all her money. and the woman refused and tried to run from Vicente, but Vicente grabbed her hand and dragged her into an empty room and beat the woman until Vicente didn't realize that the woman was dead. There was a victim of burglary who called the police and the police came to the scene, Vicente was shocked and ran away from the police. While he was hiding in his house, there was Vicente's father who was sitting looking at Vicente with a scared face. Vicente's father asked why he was afraid, Vicente answered that he was being chased by the police. Vicente's father hid Vicente so he wouldn't be caught by the police. Several days passed. Vicente's father took Vicente away from Mexico and took him to Red County. Several years have passed. Vicente tried to repeat this evil activity because he was bored and he tried to join a gang in the Verona Beach area. He was told to sell all the illegal goods to other people and gangs. One year passed, at night Vicente received news that there would be a gang war with the police tonight, and Vicente got ready. When all the gang had discussed their plans, they all left. When the war started the plan didn't work out and in the end there were gang members who died and were dying as a result of gunfire from the police. They were all jailed for 11 years in different prisons. 11 years have passed, while Vicente was relaxing looking at the street view, someone called him. Sebastian called Vicente, he invited Vicente to go eat together at Burger Shot and wanted to talk to Vicente. When Vicente and Sebastian arrived they went inside and talked about the news. When Sebastian asked Vicente where he came from and why he moved here, Sebastian remembered an incident with his sister which was similar to what Vicente told him. Sebastian asked Vicente whether he was the culprit who killed Sebastian's sister. Vicente answered yes in panic because Sebastian was his brother. Sebastian dragged Vicente angrily out of Burger Shot. Sebastian couldn't control his emotions because he was disappointed with Vicente, Sebastian pushed Vicente to fall under the water and Vicente died because he hit a rock under the water, Sebastian ran away on his motorbike. CK Screenshots: Bukti
$RaySan$ Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Revaldo Syahputra Posted March 10, 2024 Author Posted March 10, 2024 4 minutes ago, RaySan said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Membunuh saudara perempuan teman sendiri berakibat balas dendam 5. Sudah
$RaySan$ Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 Tolong di perbaiki di bagian CK Story, dibagi menjadi 3 paragraf.
Revaldo Syahputra Posted March 10, 2024 Author Posted March 10, 2024 9 minutes ago, RaySan said: Tolong di perbaiki di bagian CK Story, dibagi menjadi 3 paragraf. Done
Revaldo Syahputra Posted March 10, 2024 Author Posted March 10, 2024 35 minutes ago, RaySan said: Nama kamu Famous Name, silahkan di ganti. Oke
Revaldo Syahputra Posted March 10, 2024 Author Posted March 10, 2024 58 minutes ago, RaySan said: Nama kamu Famous Name, silahkan di ganti. Done
$RaySan$ Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
brainfreeze52 Posted March 10, 2024 Posted March 10, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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