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Barayev_Lee [Abarehan]

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                                                                          Barayev_Lee

 

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Barayev Lee, a young man from his hometown in the Dallas area of the state of Texas. He was born on September 19 1999, he is the second of three children. His father was an entrepreneur who worked as a clothing manufacturer and his mother was a housewife. Since childhood, Lee has been familiar with illegal things such as narcotics, weapons, and so on. He knew all this because his home environment was not very good. When he was 14 years old, Lee played with his friends in a dirty environment. He became interested in criminal activities such as smoking marijuana and cocaine.

 

 

Day by day Lee's life was getting worse due to him joining one of the gangster gangs around his neighborhood which made his parents worried about Lee's attitude, he started to become unruly and often never came home for days. When he was 16 years old, Lee started carrying out criminal activities such as selling narcotics, robbing shops at night and so on. Until his parents had started to give up and surrender due to their child's attitude of not wanting to change, so when Lee returned home, his parents told Lee to leave the house and take all his clothes in a big bag. Lee obeyed his parents' words and immediately left the house and walked towards his friend's house carrying the illegal goods he ordered.

 

 

Arriving at Lee's friend's house, Lee was trapped by his fake friend and took all the illegal items he had, however. Lee survived because he managed to catch the person who trapped him off guard and escaped from the house with the remaining items he had brought before. Lee looked for a boarding house to live in and arrived at Jefferson, he started socializing and joined the gangster group there and carried out his dirty actions together.
 

 

Several years have passed, now Lee has become a mafia leader, Barayev Lee is famous in the criminal world. And finally Lee controls the criminal world.

 

 

 

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Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Mahamavian

 

 

Saya Mahamavian selaku pemilik account UCP Abarehan bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Barayev_Lee) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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Mahamavian Newbie

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3 jam yang lalu, JoniJoni said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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1.ya baru pertama kali
2.kurang dari satu bulan
3.character baru
4.tidak ada
5.tidak ada
6.rumah

Mahamavian Newbie

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8 jam yang lalu, JoniJoni said:

Jawab dengan jujur apakah kamu memiliki UCP lain selain UCP kamu saat ini? TIDAK MENJAWAB DENGAN JUJUR BERAKIBAT BANNED PERMANEN.

iya saya hanya mempunyai 1 @Mahamavian

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Character Story

Dear @Mahamavian,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Tambahkan foto pada CS kamu
  2. Jangan gunakan full bold pada CS kamu. 

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@JoniJoni
JG:RP Helper Team

Mahamavian Newbie

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48 minutes ago, JoniJoni said:
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
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Character Story

Dear @Mahamavian,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Tambahkan foto pada CS kamu
  2. Jangan gunakan full bold pada CS kamu. 

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@JoniJoni
JG:RP Helper Team

sudahh

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18 minutes ago, JoniJoni said:

GUnakan gambar manusia real

Hilangkan bold nya mas. Cari tahu bold pada tulisan itu apa.

Yang di bold hanya nama karakter kamu.

gimana apakah sudah?

 

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