cane Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 Jamal_Tessema On that day, December 3, 1992, Los Santos, in the South Central area, was born, a child named Jamal Tessema who was born into an African American family who had mediocre / sufficient wealth, Jamal was a really naughty child, he once held or delivered drugs accidentally at the age of 6 years, he was told to deliver drugs by his uncle, he was willing because he would be given candy and other sweets. After the drugs were delivered, he was caught red-handed by a SAPD who was on duty and suspected Jamal who was carrying a small plastic that he held continuously, Jamal was questioned why he could hold and deliver cocaine-type drugs that were completely illegal or prohibited, Jamal also admitted that his uncle told him to deliver the prohibited drugs. The officer found out about the identity of Jamal's uncle and found out about Jamal's family, the officer told his senior that Jamal's uncle was involved in a drug case, after that, Jamal was released and told to call his uncle to the police station, Jamal nodded and left, but it turns out, Jamal did not say anything to his uncle and only said that the drugs delivered had been received by the owner, Jamal's uncle nodded and believed, 3 days later, Jamal's house was raided by the police and Jamal's uncle was arrested on charges of drug smuggling and widespread distribution of drugs. After that incident, Jamal's uncle was imprisoned for 8 years and fined 8000 dollars, 9 years later, Jamal has grown up, he is still the same as before, he is very naughty, he even joined the gangster founded by his brother, named 52 Hoover Gangster Crips in Idlewood Ganton, Jamal carried out his usual activities to riot, Selling Drugs, Selling Weapons, and other criminal matters, to the point, the surrounding residents are mad and gather as many strong children as possible in the area, they also made an alley and tried to bring down 52 Hoover Gangster Crips because it was very disturbing, until when the war broke out, all members of the 52 Hoover Gangster Crips were destroyed and died, only Jamal was left alive even though he was full of injuries, Jamal left and escaped from the place of war, finally there were 2 twins who helped Jamal to escape and take him to the hospital. The 2 twins named Shaarad Reid and Arrof Reid are people from South Central as well, they helped Jamal and Jamal also recover some time later, and after Jamal recovered, he continued his activities as usual, but with the 2 twins. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: KENKURO Account Forum yang saya miliki: $lovedkuja$ Saya lovedkuja selaku pemilik account UCP KENKURO bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jamal_Tessema) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
mvnko14 Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
cane Posted January 14, 2024 Author Posted January 14, 2024 22 minutes ago, mvnko14 said: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) | (tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) | (1 tahun kurang) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) | (buat baru) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) | (tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) | (tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) | (di rumah)
mvnko14 Posted January 15, 2024 Posted January 15, 2024 1. Lihatlah paragraf pertama. Ada pengulangan kalimat. Anda harus memperbaikinya terlebih dahulu.
mvnko14 Posted January 15, 2024 Posted January 15, 2024 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @lovedkuja, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @mvnko14 JG:RP Helper Team
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