Akbar_Saputra Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 UCP Name: akbarsaputra Old Character: Carvajal_Ullola Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/247961-carvajal_ullola-akbarsaputra/#comment-2405897 New Character: Kaylene_Alston Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Usa Reason for name change request: Ingin mencari roleplay baru Ingin menambah roleplay Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail / MP : Spoiler /My ID : Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler In the morning Carvajal Ullola woke up from his sleep because he heard the alarm sound in his room, then Carvajal got up and turned off the alarm using his left hand. But Carvajal didn't immediately get out of bed, he tried to wake himself up so he wouldn't get sleepy again. After he wasn't sleepy, Carvajal sat on the bed while turning on the television to watch the news that Carvajal liked. After Carvajal woke up, he approached the chair in the kitchen to enjoy the morning air while enjoying the food his parents made, but Carvajal's parents forgot to put drinks on the table he used for breakfast. Then Carvajal approached the refrigerator to enjoy his fresh drink. After finishing breakfast, Carvajal went to the Patriot car to return to his work as a cargo delivery man, then Carvajal got into his vehicle while warming up the engine of his Patriot vehicle. After the engine was hot, Carvajal drove the car from Palomino West to East towards Blueberry because he parked his vehicle there, namely the Petrol Tanker. After he finished delivering the cargo, Carvajal saw someone approaching him carrying a weapon on his back, then the person took off his mask to reveal his identity so that Carvajal would know. It turned out that Carvajal knew this person very well because Carvajal had given his gun to someone to entrust it to him. It didn't take long for someone to shoot Carvajal so brutally that Carvajal died at the scene. After the incident, a group of police arrived at the scene to look for the perpetrator of the murder and the police were looking for the identity of the person who died so they could notify their relatives. After the police searched for 1 week, they finally found Carvajal Ullola's real identity and from this identity the police found Carvajal's home address. Then the police approached the house and tried to look for his parents and found them and told them about the condition of Carvajal, who had been shot dead. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Vermouth Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Akbar_Saputra Posted January 14, 2024 Author Posted January 14, 2024 1 hour ago, Vermouth said: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? 1.) Sesuai. 2.) Sesuai yaitu 10 SS CK. 3.) Bersih 4.) Balas dendam 5.) Sudah
Vermouth Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 Storynya belum sampai 300 kata, silahkan ditambah terlebih dahulu.
Akbar_Saputra Posted January 14, 2024 Author Posted January 14, 2024 2 hours ago, Vermouth said: Storynya belum sampai 300 kata, silahkan ditambah terlebih dahulu. Sudah saya tambahakan, bisa di cek kembali @Vermouth terima kasih sudah memberi tahu apa yang kurang dari CK saya ini.
Akbar_Saputra Posted January 14, 2024 Author Posted January 14, 2024 31 minutes ago, Vermouth said: Masih 291 kata, silahkan ditambah lagi. Done @Vermouth, terima kasih
Vermouth Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
newlyzer Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 Reviewing, nanti setelah di-archive silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM saya.
newlyzer Posted January 14, 2024 Posted January 14, 2024 14 hours ago, Akbar_Saputra said: New Character: Kaylene_Alston Nama ini terkesan seperti nama perempuan dan juga tidak ada unsur nama khas orang rusia. Jadi diharapkan bisa diganti namanya dan sesuaikan dengan origin yang dipilih.
Akbar_Saputra Posted January 14, 2024 Author Posted January 14, 2024 14 minutes ago, newlyzer said: Nama ini terkesan seperti nama perempuan dan juga tidak ada unsur nama khas orang rusia. Jadi diharapkan bisa diganti namanya dan sesuaikan dengan origin yang dipilih. Sudah saya ganti, untuk nama mungkin tidak bisa karena saya sudah mempunyai roleplay untuk nama yang saya gunakan di IC tersebut @newlyzer. Saya harap admin bisa memahami hal ini. Saya hanya mengganti origin saya.
newlyzer Posted January 15, 2024 Posted January 15, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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