$STPLYZ$ Posted January 12, 2024 Posted January 12, 2024 UCP Name: satplayz Old Character: Treshawn Winterlay Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/260693-treshawn_winterlay-satplayz/#comment-2528259 New Character: Lucian Escribano Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Mexico Reason for name change request: Ingin mengubah alur RP Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti ss OOC Jail Spoiler ss /myid Spoiler ss /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler Treshawn Winterlay. An illegal narcotics and guns dealer famously known for his ways of treating his customers like kings. He always gives bonuses to his customers so that they will come back to him when they need something. He thrived in the illegal business since nobody else could do what he had done. He has many suppliers from all over the state. Unfortunately, his ways of doing business would soon later be the result of his death. One day, Treshawn was chilling around his neighborhood. He got a call from a customer who never buys from him. The customer told him that he got the number from an old friend of Treshawn. After a few talks, they agreed on the product and the place of the deal. Treshawn drives to his lockup and grabs the stuff that he needs. Upon arriving at his lockup, he was very shocked. The crack that the customer wants is out of stock. It is already late December where everyone suddenly disappears due to Christmas. Consequently, Treshawn is thinking quickly about what he should do next. What he did was wrap up a couple grams of pot in a way that the customer wouldn’t notice that it was not a crack. He packs it up really well and also grabs some bonuses for his customers. After all the goods were packed up, he drove his car to the location that they agreed on. Unexpectedly, the deal went very smoothly. The customer arrives in his car and tells Treshawn that he needs to hurry due to some urgent things. They had a couple of talks, and then the customer grabbed the goods and handed Treshawn his money. Finally, the customer speeds away in his car from the secluded location. Treshawn was very confused. His mind is overthinking about who that guy really is. Was it police intelligence? Or was it just a guy who was actually in a hurry? Nobody knows since he acted alone without any assistance from his friend. Many days went by, and Treshawn’s mind is still full of negative thoughts about that customer. He stopped stocking up his lockup just in case if it is indeed a police acted as a buyer since this is a customer whom he had never served before. On a sunny day in the countryside, Treshawn is strolling around in his car, trying to calm his mind down as he gazes at the views. Suddenly, an unknown car with tinted windows started to approach him from behind. At first glance, he didn’t care and just continued driving. But this car is following each and every turn he makes. Approaching a shaded and quiet place, the unknown car overtakes him and stops his car. The driver of the car disembarks from his vehicle and approaches Treshawn with a gun behind his shirt. He confronts Treshawn because the drugs that he bought were actually not the kind that he wanted. Without saying much, he unleashes hell on Treshawn by shooting a few shots towards him. After that, he swiftly ran away from the crime scene, leaving Treshawn to die. Local citizens heard the shot and called the police. Treshawn was then taken to the hospital, but unfortunately, he passed away from his wounds, leaving all his memories and loved ones behind. CK Screenshots: Bukti
brainfreeze52 Posted January 12, 2024 Posted January 12, 2024 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$STPLYZ$ Posted January 12, 2024 Author Posted January 12, 2024 2 minutes ago, brainfreeze52 said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah 2.Sudah 3.Sudah 4. Kasus penipuan barang yang berhujung ke pembunuhan 5.Sudah
brainfreeze52 Posted January 12, 2024 Posted January 12, 2024 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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