Hakim Posted December 31, 2023 Posted December 31, 2023 (edited) UCP Name: Abdulrachmanhakim Old Character: Sean_Walker Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/148796-sean_walker-abdulrachmanhakim/#comment-1455989 New Character: Ricardo Alvarado Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: mexico Reason for name change request: alasan saya ganti nama min, saya mau ganti nerega lain, dan saya mau masuk ke gang Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti oo jail /myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler Once upon a time there was a young man named Sean Walker whose job was to be a drug and weapons dealer. Sean Walker was a black young man, usually called African-American. Sean Walker is also a gangster who is under the control of the head gangster named Devonte. Sean Walker's work is very smooth and he has never been caught, let alone suspected by the police. Sean Walker has many loyal customers which makes his boss trust him to run the drug business in the Willowfield area. Generally, Sean Walker has several tricks and methods for transactions with his customers. The gangster leader also often gives Sean Walker a bonus if he sells drugs on time before the grace period. However, his boss didn't know that Sean Walker was cheating in the drug business, that is, he was mixing other powders into cocaine and his customers couldn't see it. It turned out that Sean Walker had been cheating like that for 3 years. One day he was called by a loyal customer named Arkhan Hampton, Arkhan Hampton was looking for a lot of cocaine to sell again and luckily Sean Walker had enough stock and then Arkhan Hampton bought up all the cocaine stock from Sean Walker. After making an agreement to meet with Arkhan Hampton, they negotiated about the price, because Arkhan Hampton was going to buy a lot, they had to get a discount too, what's more, the cocaine would be resold by Arkhan Hampton. After the transaction with Arkhan Hampton was completed, Sean Walker contacted his boss to meet regarding the end of the goods he had and wanted to give the money from the sale of drugs to Devonte Maxwell and coincidentally Devonte Maxwell wanted to discuss something with him and they met at a place where Sean Walker was headquartered. gave the money also to Devonte. After that, Devonte interrogated Sean Walker regarding his product, where there were rumors that his cocaine had been stolen. Initially, Devonte gave Sean a chance, but Sean didn't want to admit that he was the perpetrator. Finally, Devonte took his gun and pointed the weapon at Sean Walker. Sean Walker admitted his mistake, but Devonte didn't give him another chance and brutally killed Sean Walker with his gun. Sean Walker also died, when investigated, it turned out that Arkhan Hampton was the one who reported that Sean Walker sold a mixture of distilled cocaine to Devonte and Devonte was quite disappointed with Sean, his favorite member, because he lied at the start. CK Screenshots: Bukti nomor: 1 nomor: 2 nomor: 3 nomor: 4 nomor: 5 nomor: 6 nomor: 7 nomor: 8 nomor: 9 nomor: 10 nomor: 11 nomor: 12 Edited December 31, 2023 by Hakim sudah di edit min
Northiz Posted December 31, 2023 Posted December 31, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
Hakim Posted December 31, 2023 Author Posted December 31, 2023 ebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? sudah mas Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? sudah mas ada 12 ss Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? sudah kosong mas Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Korupsi berujung pembunuhan Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? sudah mas
Northiz Posted December 31, 2023 Posted December 31, 2023 Ricardo Ramirez termasuk Famous Name, ganti yang lain. Storynya perbaikin, bikin jadi 3 paragraf.
Northiz Posted December 31, 2023 Posted December 31, 2023 14 minutes ago, Hakim said: gimana @Northizsudah pas belum? Ada SS yang double antara SS 2 dan 3, perbaiki.
Northiz Posted December 31, 2023 Posted December 31, 2023 Approved, silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM Forum saya.
Northiz Posted December 31, 2023 Posted December 31, 2023 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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