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Erric_Mecruise


 

 

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   Erric Mecruise also known as Cruise was born on 15th June 2001 and he lives in Los Angeles. His mom was dead when he was born and his father work as businessman his father always busy and don't have time with his own child. Erric Mecruise taken care by his grandmother because his father always busy and then his father send Erric Mecruise to his grandmother. His grandmother take good care of him, his grandmother always give what he want such as toys, food and cute shirt. His grandmother try to do the best to take care of him. 

   After that, Erric Mecruise grew up and his start his first school his a good boy, his always do his homework and his help his grandmother to do something like cook and cleaning. When he want to go to school he see a truck and he like it he ask that uncle "what are you doing" and then that uncle say "I'm work right now". Start from that day Erric Mecruise want to work as a trucker. He borrow his grandmother phone to know more about trucker his grandmother see it and smile . A few weeks later his father was dead because his father get shoot by a gangster start from that day Erric Mecruise don't smile he want to revenge to that gangster. His grandmother getting old and can't do anything because his grandmother physical are to weak. His grandmother give him some motivation and his grandmother say try to forget about his father. Erric Mecruise try to forget about it but he can't he always want to know who is kill his father. A few days later his grandmother was died too due to old age Erric Mecruise don't know what to do and he was remember that site he was visit at his grandmother phone. Los Santos was open a recruitment for who  want to work as a trucker. He pack his clothes and take his father property and his fly to Los Santos.

  Erric Mecruise  start his lives in Los Santos, he make a passport and license using his father money that he bring from Los Angeles. He start his job as a sweaper and bus and he hear other people say the fish in this city is to hot and he buy some fishing tool and bait. He start his fishing at Santa maria beach but he getting bored for waiting a fish. He wait it and he catch his first fish. Erric Mecruise do that everyday and he see an article that open a recruitment for who want to be a trucker and he register to be as a trucker. He buy he own truck from that money his collected.

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 


 

Saya RikuTachi selaku pemilik account UCP RikuTachi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Erric_Mecruise) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 
    - Ya
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP
    - 1 hingga 3 bulan
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? 
    - Buat baru
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 
     - Tidak
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini?
     - Tidak
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang?
    -  Dirumah
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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @RikuTachi,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, I have reviewed your character story and as a result, I come to the decision to PENDING your character story based on the following reasons:

  1. Link gambar ganti dengan imgur.
  2. Pastikkan font dan fontsize sesuai dengan ketentuan.

I hope that you can correct the mistakes mentioned above so that I may approve your character story.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

Posted

Dear @Ariqfadhil24,

 

 

I already read your email and I see I have do to many mistake from my character story, I change all my mistake I hope there are no more mistakes. Replay me if there are mistake again, I can't wait to hear from you.

Sincerely,
@RikuTachi
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Tak tau bang saya dah lupa.. nama saya memang Mohd Zulhelmi, mungkin tu UCP pertama kali saya buat account kot. Tapi saya tak dapat main sebab mesti guna nombor Indo sekarang dah dapat pakai nombor kawan dari Indo. Saya kurang ingat.. tapi dalam ucp tu takde Character saya rasa ntah lah

Posted
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @RikuTachi,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Ariqfadhil24
JG:RP Helper Team

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