Andreano Rahel Posted December 14, 2023 Posted December 14, 2023 (edited) Tyquall Hawkins One day on January 21, 2002 a child named Tyquall Hawkins was born, he was born into a simple family and had a brother named Lyquall Hawkins, Tyquall's father worked as a farmer while his mother worked as a housewife, at the age of 7 Tyquall became a diligent child in his school and at home every time he came home from school Tyquall helped his father work and at home Tyquall helped his mother work at home.At the age of 16 Tyquall has grown up, Tyquall has been in high school, at that time Tyquall had a familiar friend named Austin Vincenzo, they both like to play together both at school and outside of school, Austin is Tyquall's best friend he hopes that Austin and himself can succeed in the future together, Tyquall has high goals and wants to make his parents happy. 3 years later Tyquall was 19 years old, Tyquall had finished school, Tyquall was confused about what else to do because he had finished school, Tyquall tried to call his friend Austin, Austin picked up the phone from Tyquall, Austin said that he and his family returned to his hometown in the city of Last Venturas, now he is a miner's worker, then Austin offered Tyquall the same job, Tyquall agreed and planned to migrate to the city of Last Venturas, Tyquall asked his parents for permission, if he wanted to go to Last Venturas because he also had a friend there, his parents also allowed Tyquall, Tyquall also thanked his parents in. The next day Tyquall said goodbye to leave, Lyquall as Tyquall's brother took him to the Sanfierro airport. A day later Tyquall asked his parents for permission, if he wanted to go to Last Venturas because he also had a friend there, his parents also allowed Tyquall, Tyquall also thanked his parents in, the next day Tyquall said goodbye to leave, Lyquall as Tyquall's brother took him to the Sanfierro airport. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Andreano Rahel selaku pemilik account UCP darriel bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Tyquall Hawkins) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited December 14, 2023 by Andreano Rahel
$chaos$ Posted December 14, 2023 Posted December 14, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Andreano Rahel Posted December 14, 2023 Author Posted December 14, 2023 5 minutes ago, Deryl666 said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Tidak Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 6-1tahun lebih Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Charlama, tetapi forum baru dan saya masih memakai cs lama) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Di rumah
$chaos$ Posted December 14, 2023 Posted December 14, 2023 Jadikan 3 paragraf dan sama ratakan jumlah baris disetiap paragrafnya, perbaiki.
Andreano Rahel Posted December 14, 2023 Author Posted December 14, 2023 8 minutes ago, Deryl666 said: Jadikan 3 paragraf dan sama ratakan jumlah baris disetiap paragrafnya, perbaiki. done
$chaos$ Posted December 14, 2023 Posted December 14, 2023 Sama ratakan jumlah barisan pada setiap paragraf, perbaiki.
Andreano Rahel Posted December 14, 2023 Author Posted December 14, 2023 26 minutes ago, Deryl666 said: Sama ratakan jumlah barisan pada setiap paragraf, perbaiki. dah min
$chaos$ Posted December 14, 2023 Posted December 14, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Andreano Rahel, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Deryl666 JG:RP Helper Team
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