[CN] Benny_Wayne to Ljudevit_Cathassach (jklhos)

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UCP Name: jklhos

Old Character: Benny_Wayne

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/214085-benny_wayne-jklhos/#comment-2071571

 

 

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New Character: Ljudevit_Cathassach 

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Croatia

 

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Reason for name change request:

Ingin menghilangkan crime record dan mencoba RP baru.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

Bukti

 

 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

One day, when Benny Wayne, who was lazing around the house while waiting for the Hauling queue, was suddenly called by Neill Scaletta or can be called Benny's close friend. Then Benny picked up Neill's phone to ask how he was doing because lately Benny rarely spent time with Neill, Benny chatted with Neill with a very happy feeling because Benny felt Neill had not forgotten him. However, behind all this there is an evil plan that Neill will do to kill Benny. All this time Neill had been harboring a grudge against Benny because Benny always undermined Neill, Neill was always undermined by Benny in front of his other friends, so Neill felt hurt and could not hold back his anger so he thought of killing Benny.

At the beginning of the meeting, Benny felt a little strange with Neill, because Neill was not usually cheerful, as it was known that Neill always had a cold expression towards Benny, but Benny thought it was normal because it could be that Neill was in a good mood. All day long they played together at Santa Maria Beach to go fishing, went to the bicycle rental to ride around Santa Maria Beach, played games together, and much more. However, Benny became increasingly suspicious of Neill's strange behavior but Benny ignored it. Before they went home, Neill said some incoherent words to Benny, and Benny felt that Neill was strange but Benny ignored him again and again.

After they had fun and went home, Neill suddenly changed the route to a deserted place, Benny who was surprised asked Neill what he was going to a deserted place for, suddenly Neill pulled out his firearm and told Benny to raise his hands, Benny who was scared asked again and Neill answered because Neill felt that Benny had always prevented him from succeeding, Benny who really did not know anything tried to calm and straighten out the misunderstanding that occurred between the two of them, but Neill's emotions had really peaked and Neill pulled the trigger and the shot hit Benny in the chest.

Neill who was really emotional suddenly felt guilty, the actions he had done were unforgivable, Neill was confused about what to do with Benny who was gradually losing blood and dying, because it was too late and Neill did not want to be caught by the police, inevitably Neill had to take the dying Benny and throw it into the ocean. Finally, Neill's personal vendetta has been avenged, although Neill feels remorse for killing Benny.

 

CK Screenshots:

Bukti

 

 

Edited December 12, 2023 by sweenevily
edited & izin merubah/membalikkan nama baru

[Northiz]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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53 minutes ago, Northiz said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

1. Sudah.

2. Sudah.

3. Sudah.

4. Dendam pribadi seorang sahabat.

5. Sudah.

[Northiz]

1. Tolong story alurnya dibenarkan lagi, jelaskan alasan lawan RP membunuh karakter kamu.

2. Ubah ini, karena dari SSRP yang saya tangkap adalah bukan pengkhianatan melainkan dendam pribadi.

15 minutes ago, sweenevily said:

4. Pengkhianatan seorang sahabat.

3. Origin tidak bisa "Croatian-American" karena menunjukkan Negara saja, contohnya "Croatia" atau "U.S.A" dan hanya boleh pilih 1 saja, perbaiki.

1 hour ago, sweenevily said:

Origin: Croatian Americans

 

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30 minutes ago, Northiz said:

1. Tolong story alurnya dibenarkan lagi, jelaskan alasan lawan RP membunuh karakter kamu.

2. Ubah ini, karena dari SSRP yang saya tangkap adalah bukan pengkhianatan melainkan dendam pribadi.

3. Origin tidak bisa "Croatian-American" karena menunjukkan Negara saja, contohnya "Croatia" atau "U.S.A" dan hanya boleh pilih 1 saja, perbaiki.

 

1. Sudah saya edit.

2. Sudah diedit.

3. Croatia saja.

 

[Northiz]

Approved, silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM Forum saya.

[Northiz]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.