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[CN] Lucas Cohle to Declan Breaux (DeathLily)


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UCP Name: DeathLily

Old Character: Lucas Cohle

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Declan Breaux

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

Unappropriate name.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

Spoiler

Lucas Cohle, has walked through every adversary, which are only misfortunes ever since child. He was abused, left alone in an orphan. He served his country as an Army Ranger. He has seen many deaths, war crimes from both sides, enough to haunt him for live. Yet, he keeps on. After retiring, he settled with a family, but another tragedy struck upon him not long after his marriage. His daughter was diagnosed with a rare disease, leading to her death just a few months later. His marriage fell apart, he became a drunkard, spending his money on pints after pints. He decided to move to Los Santos afterward.

Not long after moving, he was contacted by an unknown number, who then introduced himself as Cohle’s old friend. The two meets, but a third party was involved, which later known as his friend’s boss. The two talks about the past for a while, before getting straight to the point. Cohle’s friend asked him to collect information about a club that resides on the countyside. Cohle took the job. Cohle has yet to succeed in gaining that information, thinks that he can’t keep living on his retirement money, he decided to apply to the same department as his friend, San Andreas Police Department.

Cohle has successfully passed every test given by the recruitment team, and later graduated from the Police Academy. The night of the graduation, he drank with himself at a bar. His old habit of becoming a drunkard came to sight, his face reddens, indicating that he’s heavily intoxicated. He was being a bother to the other patron, to the point the table behind me was bothered by his actions and take matters into their own hands. Due to Cohle unable to think right, he was abusing his authority. The two man who was bothered was a part of a gang, which Cohle is unknown to at the time, leading to him pushing one of them. They left as soon as Cohle shows his badge. Not a few minutes later, they entered and gunned Cohle down, killing him on the spot.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
10 jam yang lalu, Tyler_Fox said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

 

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. Gang member retaliation

5. Sudah

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