PeterS Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 UCP Name: peters Old Character: Joachim Tabora Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/283620-joachim_tabaro-peters/#comment-2762171 New Character: Preston Saunders Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United Kingdom Reason for name change request: Mengubah jalur Roleplay menjadi lebih beda, dan membuat kehidupan baru. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC Jail /myid /mp CK Story: Spoiler One day in the morning there was a man named Joachim Tabora who lived in Blueeberry, that morning he was repairing his truck which was so badly damaged that it was very frustrating to repair it, when he repaired it for about twenty minutes he was frustrated and confused and didn't want to do anything. He had to force his vehicle to go to a mechanic in Los Santos who was at Ocean Docs, which was quite far away because his truck was in such a damaged condition that it usually died in the middle of the road. Some time ago the sun was very hot and it was twelve o'clock in the afternoon. He was still on his way, quite close to his damaged truck which often died on the road. He drove it very carefully, arriving in the middle of the road. it was damaged and he opened the hood and checked its condition again, when he checked it he immediately repaired it seriously and very carefully and focused and that was successful in the process of thirty minutes but it didn't last long and he continued his journey again as quickly as possible so as not to die. engine again, because he thought it would die again. While in the flint area behind the pump on the way, he met a person who was waiting for Joachim with the aim of killing himself using a Shoutgun because he had betrayed his club, he was stopped by a member of his club, namely Kevin Kenneth, he immediately pointed at his head. Joachim with his Shoutgun was very annoyed and full of emotion, they were very angry because he betrayed their club and not long after that Kevin alone took the bullet towards Joachim's head and shot him brutally and with hatred until he died just like that. CK Screenshots: Bukti
newlyzer Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
PeterS Posted November 23, 2023 Author Posted November 23, 2023 11 minutes ago, newlyzer said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC. 1. Sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan yang diberikan. 2. Sudah, Terdiri 11 Screenshoot. 3. Sudah sangat bersih. 4. Berkhianat dengan Club nya. 5. Sudah, seperti yang ada digambar telah di Penjara.
newlyzer Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 Tolong upload seluruh screenshot yang ada melalui imgur atau discord, karena dari postimage tidak dapat terlihat.
PeterS Posted November 23, 2023 Author Posted November 23, 2023 Edited, sudah saya edit min menggunakan discord @newlyzer
newlyzer Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 10 hours ago, PeterS said: Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/283620-joachim_tabaro-peters/#comment-2762171
newlyzer Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 Reviewing, nanti setelah di-approve silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM saya.
newlyzer Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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