VinceKennedy Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 (edited) Hobert Halyn One day there was a child named Hobert Halyn who lived in Palomino Village, Hobert was born on August 13 2000 in that village, He lived with his parents with insufficient economic conditions for every day, because Hobert's father only worked as a logger a tree whose salary was no more than a day's worth of food. And one day Hobert was 6 years old and Hobert wanted to go to school like his friends. Because Hobert's father was getting older and his income was less, Hobert's father couldn't pay for his child's schooling. Hobert also felt sad because he couldn't go to school like his other friends, so Hobert could only stay at home and accompany his mother to wait for his father to come home from work. One day Hobert's father was so ill that he couldn't continue his work as a tree cutter because Hobert's father was old and no longer fit to work hard like a tree cutter which required a lot of energy, so Hobert decided to continue his father's work at the age of 17. Because Hobert doesn't have any siblings from his mother, Hobert is the one who works and is the right hand of his family. As the days go by, Hobert's father gets sicker and sicker to the point of coughing up blood and Hobert can't do anything other than pray to God and continue his work as a lumberjack. , And not long after Hobert's father died, Hobert and his mother could only accept his father's departure while crying for his father. And one day Hobert planned to go to the city of Lost Santos with his mother but because Hobert didn't have much money, Hobert continued work temporarily and collect money to go to town. And when he got the money that Hobert had collected to go live in the city with his mother, Hobert rushed to the city via the bus route, and when he got there Hobert could only stay with his mother because he saw the bustling city of Lost Santos, so Hobert trying to ask other people for a boarding house to live with his mother, Hobert was finally able to find a small and cramped boarding house on the outskirts of town, Hobert was happy and said to his mother that he had found a boarding house and when he got there Hobert started his life on the outskirts of town, and one day Hobert couldn't relax in his boarding house and spent money buying food without working like before, so Hobert decided to look for work as a hotdog seller. After Hobert found a shop selling hotdogs, Hobert tried to applied to become a Hotdog worker, and as the days went by the Hotdogs that Hobert sold became increasingly popular until the queues were long, Hobert always received praise from his boss because the deposit he gave was more than that of other workers and his merchandise was selling well until the queues were long, until one day Hobert could live on simply by being able to buy what he wants. And one day Hobert's mother was suffering from a respiratory illness, Hobert felt panicked and rushed to take her to the hospital using an online taxi. When he arrived there, Hobert's mother died. Hobert was very sad because his mother had left him. and his father a year ago, and now Hobert can only continue his life alone in a boarding house as a hotdog worker. Every day the hotdogs that Hobert sells are getting quieter and there is not even a long queue like before, Hobert is also angered by the hotdog seller's boss who thinks Hobert didn't work properly. Not long after, Hobert was fired from the hotdog job. He felt sad because that was the only job he could do. Hobert worked at hotdog for 1 year and a half. Because Hobert was fired from the hotdog job, Hobert also had the idea to build a business. As a hotdog competitor, Hobert started building a small shop to sell hotdogs and not long after, around 2 to 4 months, Hobert's food shop was flooded with customers and Hobert felt happy to be able to have a successful business. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 2 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: VinceKennedy Account Forum yang saya miliki: VinceKennedy Saya VinceKennedy selaku pemilik account UCP vincekennedy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Hobert Halyn) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 26, 2023 by VinceKennedy
mvnko14 Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
VinceKennedy Posted October 26, 2023 Author Posted October 26, 2023 (edited) 20 minutes ago, mvnko14 said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( 2 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? ( Namechange ) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? ( Tidak ) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? ( Tidak ) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? ( Di rumah ) Edited October 26, 2023 by VinceKennedy
mvnko14 Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 1. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas.
VinceKennedy Posted October 26, 2023 Author Posted October 26, 2023 44 minutes ago, mvnko14 said: 1. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. maaf mang agak ngelag otak, Sudah silahkan di cek kembali mang.
mvnko14 Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 15 minutes ago, VinceKennedy said: maaf mang agak ngelag otak, Sudah silahkan di cek kembali mang. Belum di Justify itu, sudut kanan sama kirinya sama rata.
VinceKennedy Posted October 26, 2023 Author Posted October 26, 2023 26 minutes ago, mvnko14 said: Belum di Justify itu, sudut kanan sama kirinya sama rata. Di ratain seperti ini ya mang?
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