Nara Sativa Abigail Posted October 9, 2023 Posted October 9, 2023 Tom_Jarus Born Thomas Hackley Jarus, in the early 70s as the son of Tara Maggie and Tiny Jarus. His mother left the family when Tom was 7 months old, and it's unclear what led his mom to make this decision, leaving him to be raised by his Pentecostal and quite religious grandmother as well as his alcoholic father, a day factory laborer on the automotive industry. Grew up without a mother's affection, in an environment marked by high levels of crime in the city. His post-war veteran father, raised and shaped Tom into an arrogant and aggressive individual, in order to preparing him to survive in any circumstances. Young Tom was known for his mischievous behavior in school, often getting into trouble, was suspended for assaulting his math teacher – he was truly despised math. He was frequently engaged in fights with both peers and older students, leading to his expulsion from school in the eleventh grade due to a series of disciplinary issues. Many of his neighbour friends became drug addicts, Tom chose to spend his time in his father's private garage. Apart from that, Tom also had an obsession with war, weapons, and the like. This prompted him to attempt to enlist in the United States Army, aged nearly seventeen. Eighteen months later, Tom received an honorable discharge when it was discovered that he had falsified his birth certificate in order able to join. Tom had liked the discipline, sense of responsibility, and masculine camaraderie. During his eighteen months in the U.S Army, he learned valuable lessons on survival and how to disassemble weapons. After his return from the Army, Tom drifted his simple life in the automotive world. His friends who shared a hobby often visited him, he was not only friendly but also reliable when it came to large-cylinder motorcycles, influenced and gained knowledge from his oldman and surroundings. Either way, Tom explored other avenues to earn a living, working as a tattoo artist, piercings, and working as a bouncer at a club. Tom was grew up riding his oldman's retro bike and got his first Harley Davidson when he was 19. His oldman Tiny bequeathed his Hydra Glide Harley Davidson to Tom before his passing, a source of great pride and honor to care for the motorcycle that had accompanied Tom through his teenage years. Tom also had a keen interest in heavy metal and hard rock music, with Motorhead being his favorite band. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/284148-cn-angie_napalm-to-tom_jarus-gilangablu/#comment-2768398 Account UCP yang saya miliki: gilangablu Account Forum yang saya miliki: Nara Sativa Abigail Saya Nara Sativa Abigail selaku pemilik account UCP gilangablu bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Tom_Jarus) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Scumbag Posted October 9, 2023 Posted October 9, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Nara Sativa Abigail Posted October 9, 2023 Author Posted October 9, 2023 2 jam yang lalu, Scumbag said: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih. 3. Namechange. 4. Tidak. 5. Tidak. 6. Di rumah.
Nara Sativa Abigail Posted October 10, 2023 Author Posted October 10, 2023 1 jam yang lalu, Scumbag said: jadikan 3 paragraf Sudah di perbaiki.
Scumbag Posted October 12, 2023 Posted October 12, 2023 gunakan salah satu pada subject, mau pakai nama apa istilah he/his
Nara Sativa Abigail Posted October 12, 2023 Author Posted October 12, 2023 58 minutes ago, Scumbag said: gunakan salah satu pada subject, mau pakai nama apa istilah he/his Sudah aman mas. He sebagai subject, dan his saya gunakan untuk kepemilikan.
Scumbag Posted October 14, 2023 Posted October 14, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Nara Sativa Abigail I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Scumbag JG:RP Helper Team
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