$3nglishpear$ Posted October 6, 2023 Posted October 6, 2023 UCP Name: weisz Old Character: Nauval Pranata Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/281525-nauval_pranata-weisz/#comment-2741537 New Character: Nathanielle Zephaniah Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United Kingdom - Birmingham Reason for name change request: trying a new atmosphere to expand my roleplay horizons as black britons. Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti CK Story: Spoiler Nauval resided in a calm neighborhood on one of the most lovely afternoons. It was a beautiful day as the sun was shining and a gentle breeze blew. After completing his household duties, she found himself sitting down in the yard to enjoy a quite calm morning. His phone rang as he basked in the warm rays sun. He introduced him to one of his friends named Darryl who he knew from childhood. For long, they were neighbors who grew up together and recently distanced as they went about their affairs of life. Darryl exclaimed ‘Nauval, it’s so good to talk to you!’ “Just wondering when it had been,” Nauval agreed that they should touch base once in a while. Then Darryl stated that he had something that he would explain was a very interesting business idea. “Well, it is amazing as since I began my own delivery business I have now secured a large contract which really pays a lot. Can you help me in this as you seem honest?!” says Nauval who recently lost his job and it has been hard for him. But he cautiously inquired at Darryl about the nature of the job itself. Darryl claimed that transporting packages from a point of origin had never been outlawed according to his bosses. He assured Nauval, ‘It will not take long; in and out. You get $5,000 for just one afternoon’s work! That is more money than you have seen for a while!’. Curious yet cautious, Nauval accepted Darryl’s invitation for him to visit and discuss other important issues before making the final decision. Upon his arrival, Darryl turned full of charm, highlighting that it was such an enormous chance and that Nauval had fitted perfectly into the post. Initially, Nauval had some misgivings about these dollar signs slowly filling up in his mind. Darryl promised that he would not be taking a very long time since the factory in question was a mere short distance from Willowfield. After all, everyone was excited about earning that hard money, and therefore, Nauval followed Darryl in his car eagerly. He directed Nauval to remain by his car immediately upon their entrance into the building, leading him to negotiate with clients’ representatives. Darryl motioned towards the anxious taping of Nauval’s fingers. When Nauval climbed out, only his mouth opened in horror. Darryl along with one of the leaders of the clients aimed their guns right at Nauval. ‘Sorry man’, whispered Darryl coldly. ‘You were just bait’. Two gunshots were heard even before Nauval had a chance to respond and they boomed loudly. CK Screenshots: Bukti
newlyzer Posted October 7, 2023 Posted October 7, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
$3nglishpear$ Posted October 7, 2023 Author Posted October 7, 2023 13 minutes ago, newlyzer said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? 1. Sudah 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 4. Betrayal 5. Sudah
newlyzer Posted October 7, 2023 Posted October 7, 2023 CK Screenshots-nya bagus, cuman tidak sesuai dengan yang diharapkan karena tidak ada unsur text-based roleplay server yang terkandung di dalamnya, jadi tolong diperbaiki ya.
$3nglishpear$ Posted October 7, 2023 Author Posted October 7, 2023 Edited, mohon dikoreksi min @newlyzer
newlyzer Posted October 7, 2023 Posted October 7, 2023 Reviewing, nanti setelah di-approve silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM saya.
newlyzer Posted October 7, 2023 Posted October 7, 2023 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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