moroniq Posted September 7, 2023 Posted September 7, 2023 (edited) Mile Clark MILE CLARK Character Name: Mile Clark Origin: United States of America Story: Born in the city of Detroit, Michigan, United States on March 20th, 2003. A child of African-American descent who was traumatized by the violence that always occurred in his family. Living in an environment of gangsters and criminals, Mile grew up without parental supervision. At the 15th, Mile Clark ran away from home and grew into a cold-blooded teenager. Mile Clark met a teenager who had the same fate as Mile, the teenager named Fred Allison. Fred Allison came to the rescue when Mile was mobbed by a group of street gangs. There was a 2 against 6 fight between them, at that time Mile and Fred couldn't fight much and had to give up in the hands of the street gang. Mile immediately approached Fred, who was unconscious at the time, but Mile was immediately pulled by the street gang and they tortured and stabbed Mile's left eye until now Mile can only see with one eye. They both couldn't do anything until they were in the hospital. Their friendship begins, and they do whatever it takes to survive. Street fighting, robbing and selling drugs were all part of their lives. Until one night, they both agreed to rob a convenience store, but the police on patrol saw them from outside the convenience store and immediately cracked down on them at the scene. A racist cop did inappropriate things to teenagers, making them both put up a fight until finally Fred died while fighting back because he was shot. He was eventually caught and imprisoned in juvenile detention.His time in prison forced him to learn to survive in all conditions. Because he was not physically strong, he became a person who had to be reliable in twisting facts and how to trick people who could threaten his life. Mile hated white people and was always afraid of the white police who traumatized him in the past. At the age of 20, He was released from prison and immediately flew to Los Santos to continue his life and seek protection from people of the black race who could help and become his family. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: moroniq Account Forum yang saya miliki: moroniq Saya moroniq selaku pemilik account UCP moroniq bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Mile Clark) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited September 8, 2023 by moroniq
Vermouth Posted September 7, 2023 Posted September 7, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
moroniq Posted September 7, 2023 Author Posted September 7, 2023 1. Ya 2. Kurang dari 1 bulan 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
Vermouth Posted September 8, 2023 Posted September 8, 2023 23 hours ago, moroniq said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Silahkan threadnya diedit dan diisi pada bagian ini dengan nama UCP dan Forum kamu.
Vermouth Posted September 9, 2023 Posted September 9, 2023 Jawab jujur, Storynya didapat atau dibuat darimana? Akun UCP kamu bergantung pada jawaban yang kamu berikan, dibanned atau tidaknya. Jadi harap berpikir dahulu sebelum menjawab karena kamu tau konsekusensinya bagaimana.
moroniq Posted September 9, 2023 Author Posted September 9, 2023 Untuk character story diatas saya membuatnya sendiri dan sedikit refrensi dari OG crips, untuk kebenaran tulisan saya bisa check langsung di plagiarm checker. Terimakasih.
Vermouth Posted September 11, 2023 Posted September 11, 2023 Kamu pakai Ai ga? mungkin buat grammarnya / yang lain.
moroniq Posted September 11, 2023 Author Posted September 11, 2023 beberapa kalimat saya gunakan translator, apa boleh saya revisi lagi agar mudah dipahami?
Vermouth Posted September 11, 2023 Posted September 11, 2023 5 hours ago, Vermouth said: Kamu pakai Ai ga? mungkin buat grammarnya / yang lain. Ini mas silahkan dijawab.
moroniq Posted September 11, 2023 Author Posted September 11, 2023 Maksudnya Ai Generator gitu mas? Untuk story itu saya buat original dari saya dan saya tulis sendiri tanpa menggunakan Ai seperti itu. jadi saya tidak pake Ai sama sekali
Vermouth Posted September 11, 2023 Posted September 11, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @moroniq, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Vermouth JG:RP Helper Team
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