SatryaTristanaya Posted September 6, 2023 Posted September 6, 2023 UCP Name: SatryaTristanaya Old Character: Fernando Enriquez Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/184882-fernando_enriquez-satryatristanaya/#comment-1801209 New Character: Kyriee Mitchell Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: United States of america Reason for name change request: Ingin menghilangkan criminal record dan menjalani cerita baru dengan character baru Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC jail Spoiler /myid Spoiler /mp Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler As the sun sinks into dusk in suburban San Andreas, Fernando Enriquez walks along a busy street. He didn't have any special plans today, Just wanted to relax after a hard day at work. But that day Fate will bring him to an unexpected meeting. After finishing buying pizza at the pizzeria. When he had finished buying and headed away from the place, their eyes met a figure he knew very well, Gordian Marcel. Gordian Marcel is his old friend who was the target of bullying by Fernando in the past. This encounter was an unexpected coincidence, and Gordian seemed to have changed. He greeted Fernando with a smile and invited to talk. However, instead of speaking respectfully or trying to repair the damaged relationship, Fernando chose to repeat his past mistakes. He started bullying Gordian, teasing and saying demeaning things. Gordian, who was now mature and courageous, Unlike before, Who was geeky, did not accept Fernando's behavior with silence. He felt that he had had enough of the bullying he had received. Patiently, Gordian invites Fernando to duel with a more manly fight. It seems that Gordian is already emotional with Fernando. However Fernando seems to be laughing at gordian as he will not win with Fernando. He continued to insult Gordian and even started bringing up the Gordian family and there, Fernando accepted a fight invitation. This was the breaking point of Gordian's patience, Who felt that he needed to teach Fernando a lesson so he could feel what it was like to be a victim of bullying. After they had finished fighting, Fernando was the one who won the fight, Gordian lay on the ground helpless because of the commotion between the two of them. Fernando also kept telling and comforting the Gordian family, Including his mother. Fernando also spat on Gordian and left Gordian who was lying on the street . The next day, Gordian met Victor Osama. This Victor Osama is Fernando Enriquez's friend, Gordian spoke to Victor he would invite Fernando and invite Victor. Gordian contacted Fernando by telephone and invited him to rematch somewhere in North Rock. Fernando accepted the invitation and went to the place that Gordian had determined. When they arrived there, Gordian and Victor were alone and Fernando was alone at the place where Gordian and Fernando were rematching. Fernando seemed very surprised that Victor was next to Gordian and said that Victor had betrayed Fernando. Gordian and Fernando were ready to fight a second time. And here there was a fight between Gordian and Fernando, Fernando still said Gordian was a coward, mama's boy. And Fernando is arrogant that for the second time he will definitely win. Gordian here wants to prepare boxing gloves he took in the trunk of Victor's car. Everyone was ready and wanted to start a fight. Unsuspectedly, Gordian took out a gun and pointed it directly at Fernando's head. Fernando was very shocked to see Gordian carrying a firearm and was scared. He apologized to Gordian for what happened yesterday at the pizza restaurant. But Gordian didn't forgive him. He was very emotional about Fernando's behavior which demeaned him and his family, including his mother. Gordian shot Fernando several times in the head and Fernando died on the spot. Gordian and Victor left the area and Fernando died too. CK Screenshots: Bukti
Ooxy Posted September 7, 2023 Posted September 7, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
SatryaTristanaya Posted September 7, 2023 Author Posted September 7, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? 1. Sudah sesuai 2. Sudah sesuai 3. Sudah bersih 4. Kasus pembunuhan balas dendam 5. Sudah di jail ooc
Ooxy Posted September 7, 2023 Posted September 7, 2023 Accepted, please wait for Administrator 1+ to process your change name.
newlyzer Posted September 7, 2023 Posted September 7, 2023 Reviewing, nanti setelah di-approve silakan cek '/autocn' dulu, jadi jika ada kesalahan bisa PM saya.
newlyzer Posted September 7, 2023 Posted September 7, 2023 Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.
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