LyzerX Posted September 3, 2023 Posted September 3, 2023 (edited) Donnie_Hung In 1995, a child named Donnie Hung was born in Hong Kong. He was different from other children in that Donnie was born without his father accompanying him, whose father died of a heart attack. Donnie was born into a poor family and lived with his mother and older brother, where he had an older sister named Anchie Hung, Donnie's older sister who was four years different from him always guided Donnie to grow up to be a good child. When Donnie entered the 2nd grade of junior high school, he was forced to sell the cakes his mother made at school because it was to support Donnie's school fees too, but it seemed like it was a problem for Donnie because he became the object of ridicule by his friends, however, Donnie had to do that so he could continue going to school. When he came home from school he cycled and saw an old man, where the old man's car was in trouble, Donnie was taught to help each other and he helped the old man to call a mechanic to the location where the old man's car had broken down. After that, the old man was very grateful to Donnie who helped him in return. He gave Donnie a little money and a business card, then the old man said, "Come to that address if you need a job", Donnie could only nod his head. One day, Donnie's mother fell so ill that the decision had to be made to have surgery on her brain. However, Donnie doesn't have any money and neither does his older brother who is unemployed because he dropped out of school so that Donnie goes to school. But Donnie remembered the old man's words that he had helped at that time, he rushed home from the hospital and left his mother with his brother and he looked for the address on the old man's business card, and he found the location point of the man's address. Then Donnie pedaled his bicycle to that location. When he got there, Donnie was surprised to see the old man's very luxurious house. At first Donnie gave up his intention to meet the old man, but suddenly he remembered his mother's condition, so he had the courage to go in. When he arrived in front of the gate he was not greeted well by the guard there, but soon a luxury car arrived, then from inside the car someone opened the window, it turned out to be the old man Donnie had helped. Donnie was invited to come in like most people. Donnie was very amazed by the man's luxurious house, he was told to sit down then the old man approached him and several of his servants served him drinks and snacks and the old man introduced himself as Eddie Fung. Eddie Fung is the head of a group of Triads who control the area, Donnie also asks Eddie for a job to make money, and Eddie accepts this. In the next few years, Donnie becomes an adult, his mother recovers from her illness because of Eddie's help. Now Donnie works as an executioner or executioner at the Triads run by Eddie, he has done several missions and all of them are successful on average. Therefore Donnie grew up to be a cold and cruel person because of his childhood which was often bullied, he was nicknamed the Chinese Vampire because he was thirsty for blood and always remained silent like a Vampire. One day Donnie was assigned to execute another group that competed with Eddie, Donnie accepted the mission and immediately moved without further ado. Arriving at the place, Donnie and several of his colleagues sneaked in and there was a shootout between Donnie and his colleagues against the group, but the boss or the person he wanted to kill managed to escape and then survived. Donnie delayed killing him and went straight home, how surprised Donnie was when he arrived at his mother and brother's house covered in blood and several gunshot wounds in their chests. Donnie was devastated by the death of his mother and brother where he is now living alone, Donnie immediately looked for information on who killed his mother and brother. How shocked he was when he found out that the killer was Eddie Fung, a person he considered family. Eddie killed his mother and brother not without reason but he was very disappointed in Donnie who just let go of his target which ended up reporting to the police and providing some evidence of Eddie's crimes. The next target is Donnie who will be killed, Donnie is still frustrated because of the death of his mother and sister and is haunted by a killer who could kill him at any time and in the end Donnie escapes from Hong Kong and heads to Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/280361-cn-vittorio_charleston-to-donnie_hung-lyzrex/ Account UCP yang saya miliki: Hanya ini (LyzerX) Account Forum yang saya miliki: @LyzerX Saya LyzerX selaku pemilik account UCP LyzerX bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Donnie_Hung) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited September 3, 2023 by LyzerX
Matchalattee Posted September 3, 2023 Posted September 3, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
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Matchalattee Posted September 3, 2023 Posted September 3, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @LyzerX, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Matchalattee JG:RP Helper Team
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