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[CN] Cruz Velasquez to Dawood Dwyer (Qruzz02)


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UCP Name: Qruzz02

Old Character: Cruz Velasquez

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Dawood Dwyer

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States Of America.

 


Reason for name change request:

RPnya sudah selesai dan ingin berpindah ke cerita selanjutnya.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail :

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/myid :

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/mp :

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CK Story:

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Seconds become minutes, minutes become hours, hours become days and so on. Now that Cruz Velasquez is getting old and there's not much he can do at a time like this, the only other thing he can do is… plant as usual on the Grand Farm field. He had been working there for quite a long time, from the time he joined he had decided not to change professions after this. Whatever he wants to be in the future, he is comfortable with the job he is currently doing.

With a salary that is sufficient for his life, that's what makes Cruz no longer want to change professions to the current one. Because he feels he is so worn and old, he also sometimes thinks that his life is not long and death will pick him up at any time. To be honest… he wasn't ready for that and still wanted to live his life in peace.

As usual, where are the days he spends while planting crops in the Grand Farm fields. He never knew, that Friday 20 August 2023 would be his last day on earth. Forget about it for a while and let’s see what happens. Waking up like any other fresh morning, he got up and stepped out of his trailer to start his morning routine. Starting from waking up, brushing teeth, bathing, and so on. He started by going to buy seeds in Flint. He bought up 5 kg of corn seeds that he would plant in the fields. After that he started his activities in the fields, it continued until the afternoon where he was harvesting some plants and was approached by his junior, Dawood Dwyer.

He is surprised by the arrival of D-Wood to the farm without his knowing. Then, with Dawood in the fields now. Cruz felt he could help out with work that afternoon, by holding a plant sale with Dawood's help. Nothing out of the ordinary at the time, but right after Cruz and Dawood had finished selling their crops. Clashes began to occur, where Dawood always felt bothered and humiliated by Cruz's words that his salary was not much compared to Cruz's. 5 years working with people like that, making Dawood out of his patience. He had a very, very mature plan to teach a lesson to Cruz. He readied a Karabiner.98K rifle to finish off Cruz at that point, but Dawood was in no rush. He planned well and finally…

Cruz gets rewarded for what he has done. He was shot in the head with an SS1-V1 KAL 5.55mm bullet at the head. Making his brain function no longer work with the bullet in Cruz's head. Dawood, who no longer cared about him, decided to no longer have anything to do with or interfere with what happened to Cruz, he just left him. And Cruz ends up unlucky in the middle of a Grand Farm field with a head full of blood.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Prologue :

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Main Story :

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  • $qruzz$ changed the title to [CN] Cruz Velasquez to Dawood Dwyer (Qruzz02)
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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted
1 hour ago, Northiz said:

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah bersih

4. Dendam rekan kerja

5. Sudah

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