$iSmiley$ Posted July 25, 2023 Posted July 25, 2023 Leonardo_Rodrigo Leonardo Rodrigo was born on April 17, 2004 in Mexico City, Mexico. Leo was born into a poor family. Leo father worked as a vehicle mechanic, and Leo mother worked as a taco seller in a restaurant. Leo is a smart kid in the field of tinkering with vehicles. One day when Leo at the Flea market , Leo finds some old auto parts, Leo tries to collect the parts to small workshop in his house. Leo often crafting Lowrider-type cars with the parts Leo collects. With the car Leo made, Leo could make his own money. Leo sold the car at a flea market. With his job Leo was able to provide money to his parents to meet the needs of his family. When Leo went to the flea market, Leo was called by someone and gave information to Leo that there was a Lowrider car race in America. Leo immediately told his parents that Leo wanted go to America with the allow looking for work there. Leo parents actually did not agree, but Leo still plead to father and mother to be allowed to go to America. Leo parents finally agree Leo for go to America. With the money available, Leo left for the airport and headed to America. After arriving in America, in Los Santos to be precise, Leo went straight to the race and Leo was very happy to see the race. In the race, one of the participants suddenly had a sudden breakdown in his car and Leo quick help repair the car of the race participants. With his expertise in repairing the participant vehicle, Leo was immediately invited by the participant to become an employee in Lowrider car showroom. The next day Leo started working in the Lowrider car showroom. With the results of his hard work as an employee at the showroom, Leo was given an award in the form of a Savana car by boss. Leo was very happy with the car gift from boss. With the Savana car that Leo owns , Leo direct modified his car to be brought into the Lowrider car race. One day there was the biggest Lowrider car race in Los Santos and Leo took part in the race. In that race Leo won the race, Leo got first place in the biggest Lowrider race in Los Santos. By winning the race , Leo won quite a lot of prize money and also won three Lowrider cars as a prize. Leo also became famous among Lowrider car lovers. With this money, Leo use that money for buy his private house and Leo also built a car showroom and workshop special Lowrider vehicle. With showroom and workshop, Leo now a successful businessman and famous person among fans of Lowrider vehicles. Leo direct to open a lot job vacancies which helped residents to Leo place the business. Leo is also very proud of himself for being a successful person at a young age. Leo also invited his parents to move to America so that Leo could take care of his parents easily. But Leo's father and mother don't want to accept Leo's invitation to move to America. Leo's father and mother decided to stay in Mexico. Leo also bought a house, a new repair shop, and a taco shop for his parents in Mexico. Both his parents were proud of Leo, because Leo managed to become a successful person and improve families economy. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: idif Account Forum yang saya miliki: DIF 17 Saya DIF 17 selaku pemilik account UCP idif bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Leonardo_Rodrigo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Scumbag Posted July 25, 2023 Posted July 25, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$iSmiley$ Posted July 25, 2023 Author Posted July 25, 2023 1. Tidak 2. 4-6 bulan 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
$iSmiley$ Posted July 26, 2023 Author Posted July 26, 2023 Ucp saya hanya idif dan akun forum saya hanya DIF 17
Scumbag Posted July 26, 2023 Posted July 26, 2023 gunakan salah satu pada subject, nama apa istilah he/his
Scumbag Posted July 27, 2023 Posted July 27, 2023 grammar sama punctuationnya masi berantakan, tolong di perbaiki
Scumbag Posted July 28, 2023 Posted July 28, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @DIF 17, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Scumbag JG:RP Helper Team
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