BernardLuiz122 Posted June 22, 2023 Posted June 22, 2023 Craig Doswell Craig Timothy Doswell Jr. or simply Craig Doswell is a 23 years old person who is living himself in Los Santos, SA. Craig is the person who likes to speed himself on anything with the vehicle. This hobby had interested Craig so much since Craig's father took him to watch The Rally Championship when Craig was 7 years old. Since that after, Craig always collecting something that linked up with the race especially with the car. Craig has been the car enthusiast and has a dream to become a professional racer when Craig reaches the mature age for racing. Craig met someone on his college that has a same passion with him about the cars. So that makes Craig and his college became even closer on their friendship by making a car enthusiast crew named 31st Shade Wheels. Started when Craig Doswell or some people around him called Gray formed up the car enthusiast crew that led by himself, 31st Shade Wheels. Craig and his crew went into the car meeting which is their first appear on the street and made some buzz around the car meeting when one of Craig’s crew blew the race by winning. Everyone shouted out and therefore 31st Shade Wheels became the well-known after. Craig didn’t want to hype so much to this because he knows that his crew was just a minor league contender. But some of his crew felt way too arrogant for this one. So that made Craig and some of his crews were in internal conflict. Some of them confronted Craig to start making a lot of fame on the street by taking out the huge score which was The Police Patrol. In that matter, which was bringing out the dilemma over Craig. In one side, Craig still wasn’t ready to take a high stake like his crews told him in confront. But in the other side, their crew was facing up the financial problem in their shop. So that was making Craig chose up to led his crew for taking that challenge. Craig led the way up on the highway along to scout the Police Highway Patrol and gas on them for a chase run. Unluckily, Craig was being chased up as the main felony and The Highway Patrol caught him badly. Craig had been accused for reckless driving, violation on the highway and avoid the warn from the authority. So that made Craig got locked up and jailed for about 3 years in prison plus Craig had to do some of the public services as his jail sentences. For the rest of 31st Shade Wheels crew, they didn’t catch a stray on Craig and ran away from Craig. Craig now still waiting on his free from his jail sentences. It’s been past 2 years and half for him locked up in the prison. Being a prisoner is really making him desperate in the first place. Either Craig's friend or his crew didn’t come over when Craig is on the jail. From that on, Craig put himself up to not reckless anymore like Craig ever did and causing him in jail sentences. Doing a public service is the only way for Craig to feel the Los Santos air freely but not to free enough for running out like Craig used to be in the car last time. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: BernardLuiz122 Versatile ALeXeV Account Forum yang saya miliki: BernardLuiz122 Saya BernardLuiz122 selaku pemilik account UCP BernardLuiz122 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Craig Doswell) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Scumbag Posted June 22, 2023 Posted June 22, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
BernardLuiz122 Posted June 22, 2023 Author Posted June 22, 2023 16 minutes ago, Scumbag said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents Izin menjawab, min. 1. Tidak 2. 1 Tahun Lebih 3. Buat Baru 4. Ya 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah Sekian Terimakasih.
Scumbag Posted June 23, 2023 Posted June 23, 2023 gunakan salah satu pada subject, mau pakai nama apa istilah he/his
BernardLuiz122 Posted June 23, 2023 Author Posted June 23, 2023 2 hours ago, Scumbag said: gunakan salah satu pada subject, mau pakai nama apa istilah he/his Nama. Dan sudah diubah pada paragraf cerita diatas. Terimakasih sudah memeriksa.
Scumbag Posted June 23, 2023 Posted June 23, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @BernardLuiz122 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Scumbag JG:RP Helper Team
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