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[CN] Jax Telford to Eric Wayne (viperfoxid)

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UCP Name: viperfoxid

Old Character: Jax Telford

Old Character Story:

 

 

New Character: Eric Wayne

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 

Reason for name change request:

Penggantian alur roleplay dengan character baru

 

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CK Story:

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Jackson "Filip" Telford was skipping town early in the day, leaving his club, Silence of Berserkers Motorcycle Club in AWOL. No one knows where Jax went that day, he leaves the town by himself without telling nobody in the club. Years later, Jax decided to be back in town, after he works on his personal-matters back in his hometown. Riding back in town after awhile is something he's been thrilled. Although, the guilty feeling has been clouding up his mind ever since he took ride, but he's excited to meet his old-pals again after a long time. Earlier that time, Jax found out in the local news that the club has become bigger than he knew, he reads about his club that ran a succesfull massive club, with all the luxury stuffs within it. Knowing the news, Jax decides to ride straight up to where the club takes places. Turns out, all he found was an empty abandoned building with the sign that has gone rotten, it barely even survived. The idea of entering the building is almost impossible as well, so he then continue to ride along the town, reminscing the memories he once had.

 

The ride ended him up in a bar that once he and his club ran, taking a place in a small village in Dillimore. He found no one inside too, but this time, the bar seems to be more organized. While he wait for his club to be back, atleast that's what he thought. He decided to go for a pre-game drink, just to make him more relaxed, loosing away from all the tense he got during his ride. Drinks by drinks has gone passing by his throat, turns out he drank too much for only a "pre-game", making him a bit hammered at that moment. While he's getting drunk, Jax captures a glance over a pack of group coming inside the bar, he has no clue of who or why did he came to his building. The group seems to be confused aswell by the presence of Jax at the bar section. The conversations leading Jax into a brawl scene, because of Jax's arrogant act due to him getting drunk. While the group claimed to be the one who owned the building these days, Jax insisted that the building was belong to his club. The opposite group has never even heard about the club Jax stated, the Silence of Berserkers has gone a long time ago after the disappearance of Jax Telford. Jax was hoping that being back in town, he could've had a chance to apologize to his club for his absent. Knowing the club has gone, Jax's grief fueling the flame of an anger inside his heart. Jax wasn't in his prime age anymore, he could barely even survive the brawl scene when the youngster kept on landing punches onto Jax Telford. The brawl scene took Jax on the edge of the cliff, that once he saw an opportunities to escape the scene, he'd ran faster than anything. He succeed to grab the bottle he drank before, smashes it onto his opponent's head as it breaks on there, making him stunned for awhile. Therefore, Jax went out from the bar, running away from the scene. While he's off from the place, he heard about three and more trail-bike went after him, and when he peeks toward his rear-mirror to validate it, his opponent before went after him with their trail-bike.

 

The fight they had lead into a chasing scene between Jax and his opponents. While seems the youngsters knew how to take control of their motorbike, Jax seems to not be able to lose from their sight, he takes the off-road path, thinking that he could've gotten lose from them. The idea of him taking an off-road appears to not really a brilliant idea, as Jax turns out to having a hard time controlling his motorbike due to the condition of it that wasn't suited for the dirt pathway. Jax seems to struggle more once he gotten deep far, and that he couldn't control more, the bike stepped onto a muddy track, making his wheels lose grip on the track and making his body bounced against his bike. Jax tries to get up from his fall, but the group has arrives sooner than Jax could even think about. Being circled by his opponent making Jax a sitting duck at that moment. Jax hasn't even got a chance to get prepare by carrying a gun, while most of these youngsters were packed up. The group then makes fun of Jax, letting him to have his moment for awhile before they got to end his life. While Jax tries to run away from the scene, these furious youngsters then pulls the trigger of their gun, aiming it right onto Jax's head, making him deceased right away from that scene.

 

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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1 hour ago, Outworld said:
  • Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  • Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  • Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  • Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  • Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

1. Sudah

2. Sudah

3. Sudah

4. Clique antar kelompok

5. Sudah

  • miqbaaalmi changed the title to [CN] Jax Telford to Eric Howell (viperfoxid)
  • miqbaaalmi changed the title to [CN] Jax Telford to Eric Marshall (viperfoxid)
  • miqbaaalmi changed the title to [CN] Jax Telford to Eric Wayne (viperfoxid)
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25 minutes ago, Outworld said:

FAMOUS NAME

itu band bang:( bukan nama orang, masa gaboleh juga? lagian itu monthly listenernya aja cuman 100 an, headline festival gede belum pernah, akunnya aja ga verified, how is that "famous"?

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