HanzzYaaa Posted June 15, 2023 Posted June 15, 2023 UCP Name: Hanzzyaa Old Character: Hans_Flawer Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/173865-hans_frawler-hanzzyaa/#comment-1695852 New Character: Albern_ Ardolph Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Amerika Reason for name change request: menghilangkan crimericord dan membersihkan nama dari SAPD Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti /MP Spoiler /MYID Spoiler JailOOC Spoiler CK Story: Spoiler A man named Hans Flawer is a child from the city of Los Santos, Hans is a lover of money and he also really loves the people he loves, Hans has a best friend where since childhood he often has trouble with his best friend. Hans's best friend named Juanillo, usually Hans has called him Juan since childhood, Hans and Juanillo have worked together when their parents left them, they both live together, they both work as fishermen who catch fish and then sell it. A few months later, Hans was very bored with this job and Juan also said that Hans would not leave this job where he should not leave and be together so that he would not be separated, Hans decided to stop himself and not hear what Juan said because Hans was already bored. and needed more money, the two of them split up and Hans went to the boarding house where they both lived. Three months later, Hans had found a new job as a deliveryman for legal goods such as rocks that had been mined. Hans was very proud of this job because according to Hans, the salary was right for him to use in his future. It wasn't long before Hans was called by his boss where he had to deliver goods with a big truck to be taken out of town, Hans was very confused about the job because he couldn't bring a big truck finally Hans' boss didn't talk much and gave him the truck keys and money To go there, like it or not, Hans had to go. Hans felt goosebumps on the way. His heart was pounding because he was a little dizzy driving it. not for a while Hans did not carry out the task and he just left, when the next day came Hans had been followed up and expelled from this job because he had canceled the work his boss had given him, Hans was dizzy and contemplating not knowing where to work he finally went to a restaurant which is very crowded. Several years arrived and a friendly meeting arrived where Juan was successful there, when Hans was resting near a restaurant Hans saw the person he was approaching and wanted to talk, the person he met was Juan, Juan didn't talk much and gave knew to him that Hans wanted to be given a very complicated job which was selling illegal goods, Hans was surprised when he gave him a job like that but he didn't refuse because he really needed money for his future. Juani and Hans were talking about this business for hours. when Hans and Juan had talked Hans was carrying out his duties to get out of town, Juan really trusted Hans because he was a friend from childhood, not long after that Hans had arrived in a town and Hans was planning to sell goods near that town and not return to town again originally to lie to Juan, Hans became a successful person who only sold a lot of drugs. Three months later Hans was relaxing at a casino, he wanted to relax but Hans saw the person who had approached him. Hans was surprised because that person was Juanillo's best friend. Juan also talked about why Hans didn't want to come to his hometown or didn't want to approach Juan, Hans his heart was panicking because Juan was carrying heavy weapons, Juan didn't say much and finished off Hans at that place Juan had shot him in the head Hans the police had heard the noise near the Casino and approached him, Hans had died and Juan felt calm because he could avenge him and finally Juan was caught by the police, Hans was taken to the hospital when he was examined by a doctor Hans was no longer alive. CK Screenshots: Bukti
serendipity Posted June 15, 2023 Posted June 15, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
HanzzYaaa Posted June 15, 2023 Author Posted June 15, 2023 1. Sudah. 2. Sudah. 3. Sudah. 4. Pembunuhan. 5. Sudah.
serendipity Posted June 16, 2023 Posted June 16, 2023 12 hours ago, HanzzYaaa said: Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': perlihatkan tanggal dan jam yang ada di HUD.
HanzzYaaa Posted June 16, 2023 Author Posted June 16, 2023 Sudah saya perbaikin min tolong di check kembali
serendipity Posted June 16, 2023 Posted June 16, 2023 Nama baru itu famous name, silahkan diganti terlebih dahulu.
HanzzYaaa Posted June 16, 2023 Author Posted June 16, 2023 2 jam yang lalu, serendipity said: Nama baru itu famous name, silahkan diganti terlebih dahulu. Sudah saya perbaikin min
serendipity Posted June 17, 2023 Posted June 17, 2023 Calian_Asahavey Sudah pernah digunakan, silahkan cari nickname lain. Apakah character Hans masih dalam status buronan di SAPD?
HanzzYaaa Posted June 17, 2023 Author Posted June 17, 2023 26 minutes ago, serendipity said: Calian_Asahavey Sudah pernah digunakan, silahkan cari nickname lain. Apakah character Hans masih dalam status buronan di SAPD? Nama Sudah saya benerin, buat buronan saya merasa tidak lagi min soal nya udah hampir 1 bulan saya tidak pernah kontak sama SAPD
serendipity Posted June 19, 2023 Posted June 19, 2023 Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one. *Still have active charges.
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