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Chino_Bonfilio [Dzeko]

Reihan08

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Chino_Bonfilio

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   On march 18, 2001 in Monterrey, Mexico, a child named Chino Dé La Bonfilio was born, Chino is a quiet child, but he really likes pop punk music, not infrequently he also sings punk songs that he likes, Chino is a child Raised from an orphanage, Chino lives with his adopted parents and older brother, Chino was educated strictly by his father named Jaqcuille Del Bonfilio and his mother named Giorgina Ortiz "Bonfilio", along with his older brother Lino Dé La Bonfilio. His father is a property agent and his mother is a housewife. They Also Live Simple. At his educational level, Chino is a smart kid in science, chemistry, and physics. Because of his quiet and geeky nature, it's not uncommon for Chino to get bullied from his classmates, but that doesn't make Chino worried about his school.

 

 

    Long story short, on March 22, 2020, Chino met a mysterious person who offered a job to Chino. The mysterious person came from the "Cartel De Sinaloa", Chino accepted the offer. Chino Started Work As A Drug Dealer in the cities Of Monterrey And Guadalape. For start Chino sells 7 packs of Marijuana. Chino sells 1 pack of Marijuana to a Street Alley, to a delinquent friend at his school. There was an incident, Chino, who at that time was known as a Drug dealer, his father who knew about his son selling drugs, his father kicked Chino out of his house, Chino didn't know where he wanted to live, Chino was invited by his friends to Los Santos, Chino used various how to be safe to Los Santos, Finally arrived.  Chino left the business with a mysterious man from Sinaloa and wanted to do business in Los Santos. Chino has acquaintances in Los Santos who both sell drugs, Chino asks his friend to restock. When delivering 3 packages of Cocaine Drugs, Chino, who was in the middle of a drug transaction, was framed by a customer. It turned out that the customer was a member of the Police Department. As a result, Chino was also arrested by the police and then in rehabilitation. After being free, Chino prefers side jobs instead of having to sell drugs again. Lino, Chino's older brother, comes to Chino's apartment because he misses his brother.

 

 

    While Chino and Lino walked to the front of the Idlewood gang area, an unknown gang carried out a brutal drive by attack, Chino and Lino tried to escape, unexpectedly, Lino, who ran to protect Chino, was shot many times in the body which made him bleed. after the attack, Chino took Lino to the hospital, after being processed, Lino was declared dead due to continuous bleeding so that Lino ran out of blood. Chino doesn't stay silent, Chino seeks information on illegal weapons sales, Chino plans revenge with his friends, Chino buys sawn offs and his friends serve as drivers. Chino and his friends are looking for the gang that killed lino, they both accidentally saw the gang at cluckin bells east los santos, his friend who was driving slowly approached the gang, the gang who were hanging out while eating french fries knowing there would be an attack for them, the gang ran screaming for cover, Chino who was ready then shot them brutally which caused them to fall down in pain, then Chino finished their carrer by shooting them in the chest so they died on the spot, then Chino fled from the scene.

 

 

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Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

Tidak ada

 

Saya Reihan08 selaku pemilik account UCP Dzeko bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Chino_Bonfilio) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

    edit.png

     

 

Reihan08 Member

Reihan08

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19 jam yang lalu, raiyunus12 said:

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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    edit.png

     

 

1. Tidak.

2. 1-2 Tahun.

3. Namechange.

4. Tidak.

5. Tidak.

6. Di rumah.

raiyunus12 Active Forumer

raiyunus12

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Terdapat beberapa revisi yang harus di edit :

  • 3 jam yang lalu, Reihan08 said:

    Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.

    Tolong ikuti aturan penulisan ini.

  • 23 jam yang lalu, Reihan08 said:

    Account UCP yang saya miliki:
    Tidak ada

     

    Account Forum yang saya miliki:

     

    Bagian ini tolong di isi.

  • Tolong foto di perbesar sedikit.

Reihan08 Member

Reihan08

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21 jam yang lalu, raiyunus12 said:

Bagian ini tolong lebih di perhatikan lagi.

Dan komen apa bila sudah mengeditnya.

saya sudah mengeditnya, silahkan di cek min.

Reihan08 Member

Reihan08

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1 jam yang lalu, raiyunus12 said:
  • Jadikan cerita kamu menjadi 3 paragraf
  • Buat cerita kamu menjadi rata kiri dan rata kanan.

 

Tolong lebih fokus lagi saat mengedit.

sudah dibagi menjadi 3 paragraf.

raiyunus12 Active Forumer

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Character Story

Dear @Reihan08,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@raiyunus12
JG:RP Helper Team

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