JackyLuisnander Posted May 23, 2023 Posted May 23, 2023 Norrece_Baxton One day on May 5, 1999 in the city of California, United States. a child named Norrece Baxton was born. He has a happy family even though he lives a simple life. Her father is Vadrior Baxton and her mother is Varrabela Inista. while at school Norrece was often insulted by he friends because he lived in a simple family but Norrece didn't care about the insult, but one day when his went to school suddenly he was confronted by people who always bullied him at school Norrece tried to escape away from the person but he was caught and beaten black and blue. Finally Norrece decided not to go to school that day because he had been beaten up by the bullies. Norrece shed tears because he son was always being bullied by he own schoolmates. Finally the next day Norrece returned to school although he still had bruises on he body that day. Norrece doesn't seem to be bullied by the bullies who used to bully him anymore. he friends ate, but Norrece couldn't buy food because he had no money, so he friends gave him food. Norrece looks very happy because he friend gave him food. Lastly, Norrece thanks he friend for feeding him. The two of them were very close friends until they were in middle school and it turned out that they both met again in middle school. The two of them were very close since Norrece was being fed by he friend. Norrece saw he friends being beaten by he senior Norrece rushed to help he friend even though Norrece didn't know how to fight back but Norrece forced him and finally Norrece and he friend were badly beaten by his seniors, when Norrece returned from school and went home. Norrece asked his father to teach him how to fight so they could help their friends when they were being beaten or protect themselves. Finally the next day Norrece went to school with he friend. When he arrived at school, they both studied as usual and when they finished studying, they both decided to rest and went to the cafeteria to eat, even though Norrece didn't have food, but it turned out that Norrece's friend named Gior ordered Norrece food so the two of them could eat together, suddenly the bully who used to bully them both came to ask for money but the two of them didn't give it. was bleeding blood finally the bully was in pain and ran away, then he friend asked where Norrece learned to fight then Norrece said that he was taught by he father to fight, he friends Norrece also asked Norrece to teach him how to fight finally Norrece taught him how to fight true, finally he friend Norrece was able to fight and was ready to beat the bully when his came back, and sure enough the bully came back but he was not alone his brought around 5 of he friends and Norrece's friends also felt panicked because there were so many of them but Norrece not afraid because he already knew how to fight, finally Norrece convinced them that they would not run and fight back against the bully and he friends. in the end no one dared to bully Norrece and he friends, and by the time they both went up to high school level they were both in the same class but this time Norrece was not ignored by his friends anymore for reasons unknown to Norrece in the end Norrece tried to get acquainted by one of the students in the class named Hifer and the two of them became good friends. finally they both decided to join an alley and they were both taught to use prohibited items like cocaine and so on, finally Norrece lived happily in the alley with he friends. When the two of them had joined the gang they both had started using illegal goods and at one point when Norrece returned to he house it turned out that he mother and father had died because they were killed by another gang, it turned out that the gang that killed Norrece's mother and father were rivals from gang Norrece and at that time Norrece was very vengeful and angry he swore, he would avenge their actions, finally because he had no money Norrece decided to quit school and become an illegal goods dealer. really trusted by the gang and Norrece invited he friends who entered the alley simultaneously to look for the gang that killed he father and mother, until somewhere they found one person who turned out to be a member of the gang that killed Norrece's father and mother without getting wet. Norrece immediately pointed the person with a gun to he head. Norrece also asked him to tell where the other members were, finally the person showed him the place and after being shown the place, Norrece immediately shot the person dead because he could not hold back he anger anymore, when Norrece and he friends arrived at the place Norrece immediately shot blindly because he was already very angry and took all he anger out on them after shooting everyone who killed he father and mother Norrece finally returned to his alley again with he friends and Norrece decided to stay in the alley forever because there was no one that Norrece had to trust except he friends in the alley and Norrece became the most trusted person in the alley after that Norrece and he gang returned to selling illegal goods as usual because it was already a job from them. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: akramaabdur05 Account Forum yang saya miliki: @JackyLuisnander Saya JackyLuisnander selaku pemilik account UCP akramaabdur05 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Norrece_Baxton) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Scumbag Posted May 24, 2023 Posted May 24, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
JackyLuisnander Posted May 24, 2023 Author Posted May 24, 2023 2 hours ago, Scumbag said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Tidak 2. 6 bulan - 1 tahun 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
Scumbag Posted May 25, 2023 Posted May 25, 2023 paragraf baru harus menggunakan kapital pada awal katanya
JackyLuisnander Posted May 25, 2023 Author Posted May 25, 2023 oh iya maaf lupa saya min, sudah saya tambahkan huruf kapital min.
Scumbag Posted May 26, 2023 Posted May 26, 2023 subjectnya mau pakai nama apa istilah he/his, gunakan salah satunya
JackyLuisnander Posted May 26, 2023 Author Posted May 26, 2023 mau make he aja min, sudah saya revisi lagi.
Scumbag Posted May 27, 2023 Posted May 27, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @JackyLuisnander I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Scumbag JG:RP Helper Team
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