MamatZz Posted May 7, 2023 Posted May 7, 2023 (edited) UCP Name: MamatZz Old Character: Muhammad Uzair Old Character Story: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/200022-muhammad_uzair-mamatzz/#comment-1938181 New Character: Bryant Lamar Gender: Laki-laki (Male) Origin: Amerika Reason for name change request: mau masuk Fam Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp': Bukti OOC jail Spoiler https://postimg.cc/rKVb1mHk /Myid Spoiler https://postimg.cc/H8VMmbxm /Mp Spoiler https://postimg.cc/SXkzsBsD CK Story: Spoiler The begining started with Uzair having internal problems that made depression sink into his head, since he was despreate because he was confused, to the burden on his head really liked walking and sitting alone in a quiet place, and he starred avoiding crowds,Week before Uzair's death, he started avoiding crowds. Weeks before Uzair's he started avoiding crowds. Weeks before Uzair's death. Doctors diagnosed that he had been drinking too much alcohol which had caused liver and kidney failure, and get found a small tumor in his lung. This analysis made Uzair so depressed that it changed his own charateristics.Every night he is only accompanied by songs and cigarettes to leave the pressure on his head. During the day, he is very tired because he starts exercising and is very productive, every morning, afternoon and evening he is always active and leaves all the bad things behind. With great confidence, he returned to the doctor who diagnosed him checked his health fore the second time. The sad and hopeless face was back on, depressions started to sink in his head. Thoughts of injuring himself began to cross his brain, in the end he started his bad habit again by being alone and walking to a lonely place with bad hopes . Until one person was seen from aftar who was slowly getting up start approaching Uzair. Turns out it was a robber. After approaching him, he immediately threatened him, the robber wanted to take the money that was in Uzair's pocket, he forced to take money that was in Uzair's pocket, and Uzair fled towards the brige ahead and the robber chased him, and after a long distance From the robbers, Uzair also hide near behind the house, because there was no other hiding place, because it was far from his residence and he had to run as far as possible to get to a hiding place that Uzair is safe. Uzair was afraid that the robber would know because Uzair ran not far from the bridge. After a few minutes he hide there. Finally the robbers found Uzair's hiding place, after that Uzair felt weak and helpless again. Because he (The Robber) knew where Uzair was hiding, he ran as far as he could. until he finally hit a dead end Uzair finally accepted fate with the situation and asked the robber to kill him. Also remembering the illness he was suffering from, Finally the robber killed him with a baseball bat because he had run away twice, Uzair also felt peace because hislife's suffering would end. the robber stabbed Uzair in the heart and leg. of Uzair so he couldn't do anything. Then he died and lifeless, Finally Uzair's life ended. CK Screenshots: Bukti https://postimg.cc/QFkJ0kKY https://postimg.cc/vgD7YJqC https://postimg.cc/pmxDhhcf https://postimg.cc/mcpM5dLj https://postimg.cc/vDV90Lp7 https://postimg.cc/xNDXwhWv https://postimg.cc/N5typh8Y https://postimg.cc/4KYnmXGv https://postimg.cc/1n6trMff https://postimg.cc/p5JLgTQv https://postimg.cc/jwVq2NZK Edited May 7, 2023 by MamatZz mau memperkemaskan CK story
$Royalty$ Posted May 8, 2023 Posted May 8, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong ) Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.
MamatZz Posted May 8, 2023 Author Posted May 8, 2023 (edited) 17 hours ago, Outworld said: Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan? Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih? Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK? Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara? 1. Sudah sesuai 2. Sudah sesuai 3. Sudah sesuai screenshort di atas 4. Perampokan dan dibunuh 5. Sudah di jail OOC Edited May 8, 2023 by MamatZz
$Royalty$ Posted May 9, 2023 Posted May 9, 2023 Pembuatan CK kamu salah, tidak sesuai procedure. Coba liat contoh thread CN lain.
$Royalty$ Posted May 9, 2023 Posted May 9, 2023 Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one.
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