FauzanAlam Posted April 5, 2023 Posted April 5, 2023 (edited) Hubert_Randolph Hubert Randolph was born on January 21, 2000 in Dallas, United States of America. Hubert Randolph is a man who comes from African-American race from a fairly simple family. Since childhood, Hubert only hung out with friends of the same race as him. Unfortunately, Hubert Randolph was often bullied by his schoolmates, his friends were often racist to him because he was black. Hubert was like that for years, and when Hubert was 16 years old and in high school, his home area was hit by a fire that left 13 houses on fire, including his own. Unfortunately, his family had no one to rely on, so they were forced to flee to the Los Santos area, to be precise in the Idlewood area, where his father's friend offered to rent a house at a low price. Hubert Randolph had to change schools, but Hubert was pleased to see that in his new home and school environment, there were many teenagers of the same race as him. However, the Idlewood neighborhood is far from the perfect place to live. The place is full of criminal activity. He frequently skipped school and frequently yelled at passersby with his friends, and occasionally even took part in robbing in the middle of the night. This criminal activity became his daily hobby. Hubert began to take pride in his actions and was no longer afraid of committing crimes. When Hubert graduated from school, he did not have any knowledge in learning when he went to school, Hubert Randolph also had to be unemployed for 4 years. At 23 years old, Hubert Randolph is still looking for work, but only few companies or workplaces are willing to accept him. However, one job that caught his eye was being a truck driver. Because of he has muscular body, Hubert is able to lift heavy objects, whether it's fish boxes or machine components. This new job excited him to get through the day, Hubert also traveled around Los Santos and nearby towns of Los Santos. In this job he was involved in drug trafficking and other illegal activities. Hubert Randolph and his friends worked together to smuggle drugs into fish boxes and made huge profits every day. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: FauzanAlam Account Forum yang saya miliki: FauzanAlam Saya FauzanAlam selaku pemilik account UCP FauzanAlam bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Hubert Randolph) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited April 8, 2023 by FauzanAlam Memperbaiki yang perlu diperbaiki
Scumbag Posted April 5, 2023 Posted April 5, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
FauzanAlam Posted April 5, 2023 Author Posted April 5, 2023 1. Tidak 2.3 tahun lebih 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5.Tidak 6. Rumah 1 minute ago, Scumbag said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Hide contents
Scumbag Posted April 6, 2023 Posted April 6, 2023 subjectnya mau pakai nama apa he. salah satunya saja
FauzanAlam Posted April 6, 2023 Author Posted April 6, 2023 38 minutes ago, Scumbag said: subjectnya mau pakai nama apa he. salah satunya saja Done mint
Scumbag Posted April 7, 2023 Posted April 7, 2023 grammar sama punctuationnya di perbaiki, beberapa masi ada yang salah
FauzanAlam Posted April 8, 2023 Author Posted April 8, 2023 (edited) 20 hours ago, Scumbag said: grammar sama punctuationnya di perbaiki, beberapa masi ada yang salah Grammar sudah menjadi format past tense dan mungkin sudah semuanya dan tanda baca juga sudah diperbaiki. Kalau masih ada yang salah mohon diberitahukan saja kesalahannya mint Edited April 8, 2023 by FauzanAlam
Scumbag Posted April 9, 2023 Posted April 9, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @FauzanAlam I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Scumbag JG:RP Helper Team
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