[CN] Lawrence Lounsburry to Mauro Valdovinos (PapankOm)

[Papankk]

UCP Name: PapankOm

Old Character: Lawrence Lounsburry

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/152767-lawrence-lounsburry-papankom/

 

 

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New Character: Mauro Valdovinos

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Mexico

 

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Reason for name change request:

Mengganti Origin untuk bergabung faction

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

Spoiler

One day, Lawrence woke up from his sleep on the couch. Lawrence had a nightmare while he was sleeping last night. Then he took some water to wash his face at the sink. His stomach wouldn't stop churning, a sign that it needed food. Then he had breakfast at the Vinewood Cluckin' Bell and ordered the breakfast menu offered by the waiter. Lawrence ate it with gusto.

While Lawrence was eating, someone called him on his phone. Lawrence picked up the phone. It turned out to be his second brother who called, he needed money from Lawrence. But Lawrence refused because Lawrence also needed the money. Then Lawrence hurriedly left his breakfast and went to work. Lawrence do trucking missions for his life to reach succesfully.

He did trucker job since he was teenager, it was from accidental.

Lawrence started the engine of his truck and started working. the truck mission indicated that the trailer was in the El Quedabros area. the clock showed 3 pm, Lawrence was already at 2 miles to the destination. He drove leisurely listening to the radio. Arriving in the El Quedabros area, Lawrence met a robber who stopped Lawrence. The robber asked Lawrence to stop and get out of his truck by pointing a shotgun at Lawrence. Lawrence obeyed the robber's orders. The robber took money from Lawrence, but Lawrence resisted by running away from him. The robber shot Lawrence with the shotgun in his hand. Then Lawrence was died. Lawrence's death was a tragic end to his life. He had worked hard to make a living by doing trucking missions, but in a moment, everything was taken away from him. The robber who had shot Lawrence had taken not only his money but also his life, leaving behind a family that was devastated by the sudden loss.

 

CK Screenshots:

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[$bubbles$]

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[Papankk]

1. sudah
2. sudah

3. sudah

4. perampokan

5. sudah

[$bubbles$]

CK story baru 223 kata, silahkan tambahkan hingga 300 kata.

[Papankk]

edited min @bubbles

[$bubbles$]

Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.