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[CN] Theik_Abeer to Eliyahu_Winters (frinzlaszt)


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UCP Name: frinzlaszt

Old Character: Theik_Abeer

Old Character Story:

 

 


New Character: Eliyahu_Winters

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: United States of America

 


Reason for name change request:

Disuruh oleh seorang staff JG:RP.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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OOC Jail

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/myid

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/mp

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CK Story:

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                It was on Wednesday. Theik was losing his job, he did a mistake that turned out to be a great problem in his company, and he knew he was going to be fired. But instead of panicking, he had another idea to continue his life in Los Santos. Altough his life was in the corner, he tried to think positively and kept thinking about the way out of his problems. He knew a friend of his that he thought that person would be helpful to him, so he planned something and called that person. That person was Mifta Rizki. After talking a lot on the phone about what he was planning, Mifta felt convinced of the plan that Theik was presenting because Theik was once known as one of the great programmers in Los Santos too. Next day after the call, Theik went to Mifta’s place in Los Flores with his FCR-900 and continued his explanation until he gain the trust from Mifta.

 

                In the end, Mifta trusted Theik and decided to invest in Theik’s plan. But Mifta asked one thing, in 6 days or a week Theik must return that money to him with no loan interest, just as fresh as how much Theik gets the money from him, and Theik felt no problem with that. Theik took the deal, everything was okay and 1 day later Theik started the business. But the things weren’t going to work out as Theik planned, Theik couldn’t make enough money to return the money. Mifta was known as “Mifta the Alligator”, but Theik never knew that. "Alligator" was Mifta’s nickname that people gave to him because he was a mafia that collected goods from people and was known for his "unforgiving" character.

 

                On Friday, 9 days had passed and Mifta had been calling Theik since the day 7, but none of the calls was answered. But this time, Theik answered Mifta’s call. Mifta got angry and told Theik to come to his place and talk. Theik went to Mifta’s place with his FCR-900 and explained every single thing that happened to his work, but something was up in Mifta’s mind and Theik never knew that coming. Mifta asked Theik to ride him to his cousin’s place after Theik’s explanation, but Theik didn’t feel suspicious about that and he did give Mifta a ride. They went to Mifta’s cousin’s place and it wasn’t a place of Mifta’s cousin, it was just an abandoned place in Las Colinas.

 

                Mifta showed his gun and shot Theik right in his chest. And after Theik was down, Mifta shot him again in the face and kept shooting him to make sure his death. In the end, Theik died and Mifta took away his money and motorcycle that was worth more than $2000. Theik's dead body was left there, in front of an abandoned place in Las Colinas.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Edited by Frinz Laszt
Posted

Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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