Akuriot Posted January 27, 2023 Posted January 27, 2023 (edited) Sumi_Yati Sumi Yati or mostly called Sumi was born in Indonesia, she was a daughter of a couple who had their marriage for about 8 years. Sumi was born on a wealthy family who had powerful power on the government. Sumi didn't have to go to school because she was homeschooled by her parents due to worries, homeschooling affected many things and also many advantages could be earned but otherwise there's also many disadvantages about homeschooling. Sumi studied sooner than others, she had been studying the senior high school's lessons while many kids by his age had not. But it didn't make her special because the disadvantages was so impactful, Sumi had so low social skills even more she would be crying if she met someone at the first time. Her parents had done much, they were worried the impacts could not have been gone. They homeschooled Sumi because they worried because they wanted their child became the genius one, Sumi was an only daughter after 8 years struggling for earning jackpot and that was the reason. Sumi was advised by someone to live in a village which the place was very peaceful and friendly with a newcomer. Her father agreed, the guy who advised was brought to meet him. him. They had a long conversation because no mistakes shouldn't have been done, her mother cried and disagreed but the decision was unanimous. Sumi didn't agree at first but then she did, Sumi started moving to village accompanied by the guy. Sumi was worried where the guy took him because the guy told their parents, it's just Sumi and himself and no one shouldn’t be included. Sumi's father just agreed because many people rated him a good guy so he didn't check him and send a bodyguard along her. Sumi was brought by the guy, unfortunately the guy identity was a criminal who had skill on scamming rich people. Sumi was brought to Las Venturas, she was raped and auctioned in human trafficking. Sumi who had no skill in socializing even more got raped and hurt made her stressful. Sumi finally sold to a rich man, the rich man who lived in Angelphine, the man brought him and fed her. The man was a nice guy, he meant Sumi no harm and he raised Sumi as the same as the parents did her. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: CJxGAROK Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Akuriot Saya Akuriot selaku pemilik account UCP CJxGAROK bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Sumi_Yati) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited January 30, 2023 by Akuriot
BabiHutan Posted January 28, 2023 Posted January 28, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Akuriot Posted January 28, 2023 Author Posted January 28, 2023 1. Ya 2. 3 - 6 bulan 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
BabiHutan Posted January 29, 2023 Posted January 29, 2023 Hal yang perlu kamu perbaiki: Gunakan indentasi pada setiap paragraf. On 1/27/2023 at 10:39 PM, Akuriot said: were so impacting was so impactful On 1/27/2023 at 10:39 PM, Akuriot said: to met him. to meet him. On 1/27/2023 at 10:39 PM, Akuriot said: had a skill on scamming had skill on scamming
Akuriot Posted January 29, 2023 Author Posted January 29, 2023 3 hours ago, BabiHutan said: Hal yang perlu kamu perbaiki: Gunakan indentasi pada setiap paragraf. was so impactful to meet him. had skill on scamming Sudah min, terimakasihh sudah mengoreksi
BabiHutan Posted January 30, 2023 Posted January 30, 2023 16 hours ago, Akuriot said: Sudah min, terimakasihh sudah mengoreksi Paragrafnya belum rata kiri kanan, silahkan diperbaiki.
Akuriot Posted January 30, 2023 Author Posted January 30, 2023 29 minutes ago, BabiHutan said: Paragrafnya belum rata kiri kanan, silahkan diperbaiki. Sudah min , apakah seperti itu?
BabiHutan Posted January 30, 2023 Posted January 30, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Akuriot, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @BabiHutan JG:RP Helper Team
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