$getsuga$ Posted January 22, 2023 Posted January 22, 2023 Perzya_Puerto Perzya Puerto was born in Puerto Rico on May 2, 1998. He is the child of Orzan Puerto and Angelina Zendaya. Perzya or often known as Perz comes from a low-income family. Perz's father was a heavy drinker, and Perz's mother worked as a housewife. The house is very dirty and shabby. At the age of 5, Perz was sent to an elementary school in his area. He had bad grades at school, and he was hated by his schoolmates because of his bad temper. Perz was eventually kicked out of school because his teacher was so annoyed with his attitude. When Perz was seventeen years old. Perz's father is being searched for by a group of unknown people who make Perz and his family have to move from place to place so that his whereabouts are not known. A few months later Perz's father was killed by a group of people. Perz eventually decided to work selling illegal items like guns and marijuana. At the age of 23, he became a drug dealer which allowed him to have a lot of money. A few months after his success in the field of drugs, his mother died. Perz was very saddened by the passing of his mother. He now lives alone. At the age of 25, Perz now has subordinates who help him sell illegal goods. Perz and his men belong to the Latin gang organization owned by Peysoh. Perz is there helping sell illegal goods and drugs all over the city as well as the internet. Perz also tried to sell things further, even between countries, one of which was the city of Los Angeles. Perz's subordinates sold goods there at quite expensive prices, which could earn quite a lot of money. It was there that Perz started his new life by selling drugs. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/251770-cn-taviloz_guillola-to-perzya_puerto-dimas_gg123/#comment-2441215 Account UCP yang saya miliki: hanya dimas_gg123 Account Forum yang saya miliki: Hanya @getsuga Saya getsuga selaku pemilik account UCP dimas_gg123 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Perzya_Puerto) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
JazyGuzyal Posted January 22, 2023 Posted January 22, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$getsuga$ Posted January 22, 2023 Author Posted January 22, 2023 4 minutes ago, JazyGuzyal said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Name change 4.tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di rumah
JazyGuzyal Posted January 23, 2023 Posted January 23, 2023 On 1/22/2023 at 11:15 AM, getsuga said: Perzya Puerto was born in Puerto Rico on May 2, 1998. He is the child of Orzan Puerto and Angelina Zendaya. Perzya or often known as Perz comes from a low-income family. Perz's father was a heavy drinker, and Perz's mother worked as a housewife. the (setelah tanda titik, huruf awal besar) house is very dirty and shabby. At the age of 5, Perz was sent to an elementary school in his area. He had bad grades at school, and he was hated by his schoolmates because of his bad temper. Perz was eventually kicked out of school because his teacher was so annoyed with his attitude. when (Huruf awal besar kalimat awal) Perz was seventeen years old. Perz's father is being searched for by a group of unknown people who make Perz and his family have to move from place to place so that his whereabouts are not known. a (Huruf awal besar setelah tanda titik) few months later Perz's father was killed by a group of people. Perz eventually decided to work selling illegal items like guns and marijuana. At the age of 23, he became a drug dealer which allowed him to have a lot of money. a few months after his success in the field of drugs, his mother died. Perz was very saddened by the passing of his mother. He now lives alone. At the age of 25, Perz now has subordinates who help him sell illegal goods. Perz and his men belong to the Latin gang organization owned by Peysoh. Perz is there helping sell illegal goods and drugs all over the city as well as the internet. Perz also tried to sell things further, even between countries, one of which was the city of Los Angeles. Perz's subordinates sold goods there at quite expensive prices, which could earn quite a lot of money. It was there that Perz started his new life by selling drugs. Tolong perbaiki kalimat di atas yang saya beri BOLD.
$getsuga$ Posted January 23, 2023 Author Posted January 23, 2023 32 minutes ago, JazyGuzyal said: Tolong perbaiki kalimat di atas yang saya beri BOLD. Edited
JazyGuzyal Posted January 24, 2023 Posted January 24, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @getsuga, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @JazyGuzyal JG:RP Helper Team
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