[CN] Ornell_Phint to Tavell_Hawk (bhedoeatwo)

[lackinGuy]

UCP Name: bhedoeatwo

Old Character: Ornell_Phint

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/forms

 

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New Character: Tavell_Hawk

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Chicago, American.

 

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Reason for name change request:

bosan dengan nama lama, serta ingin memasuki suatu FnG.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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SS JAIL:

SS /MP: 

SS /MYID: 

 

 

CK Story:

Spoiler

Ornell Phint is a nineteen year old teenagers who lives in the Gillmore Housing Project, Willowfield. One day he woke up from his sleep because there was a pop-up SMS from his colleague Oeeb Sheeloot, he immediately rinsed his face in the bathroom and then he also didn't forget to prepare his lunch before going to the living room to eat. A few minutes passed, he came straight out of his unit, then walked to Gillmore Park, then he met Oeeb and Clevon Lamond in silence and the three of them talked about their rivals yes it was Goons Crip standing under the SixTreys umbrella, they talking about the next thing to do Ornell and his crew to clean up the Goons Crip people and they decide to tell the others.

Ornell also worked as a street hustla, one day he was visited by Barron Yessema who was also his crew that Ornell usually ordered to sell Morphine, Barron at that time needed money so he asked Ornell for a job to support his mother who was being treated in hospital, Ornell agreed. then Ornell gave a batch containing Morphine to Barron Ornell told Barron to sell it eighty for one gram no less and given a time frame of up to three days to sell everything, Barron said yes to Ornell's words and Barron left Ornell.

2 days later Barron met Ornell who was in his Patriot, then he immediately gave the dirty money to Ornell and he got a wage because he sold it faster than the time given by Ornell also gave Barron more wages because he did not live up to expectations which sold him out quicker than he would have liked after which he dropped Barron off at Gilmore Park. At night he was relaxing in front of his unit while enjoying a quiet atmosphere, and it turned out that Jayden and Moss, his rivals, came and then he dissing Ornell who was alone, because the dispute between Ornell and Jayden's gang had heated up. Moss shot Ornell's body so he couldn't breathe. again and died.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

[lackinGuy]

1. Sudah.

2. Sudah.

3. Udah

4.Di bunuh karena memiliki perselisihan dalam menjualkan narkoba dan ia di tembak oleh rivalnya.

5. Udah

@Outworldapakah ada yang harus saya revisi lagi?

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On 13/1/2023 at 23.37, hunnidbandz said:

Old Character Story:

https://jogjagamers.org/forms

 

Ini revisi, masukkan link dengan benar.

[lackinGuy]

22 minutes ago, Outworld said:

 

Ini revisi, masukkan link dengan benar.

Itu saya belum punya cs min makanya saya isi begitu

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Ya buat dulu dong CSnya, mau di denied atau accept yang penting ada CS. CN tanpa ada CS mana bisa atuh.

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Your name change has been denied, please be sure to follow the guidelines before making a one.