$camelot$ Posted January 7, 2023 Posted January 7, 2023 Rodrigo_Malillos Rodrigo Malillos was born in Mexico on September 24, 1995. From a young age, he loved motorcycles because his father loved motorcycles too. At the age of 16, Rodrigo, his father bought him a motorbike for himself, his father took him to ride on weekend. Rodrigo works in his father's workshop, he is often given money because he has helped his father in the workshop. While he was working, he heard the news that his mother and father were shot by robbers, his mother and father were buried in a grave not far from their house. At the age of 25, he asked his friend to help him in his workshop, which was left by his father. Rodrigo became interested in motorcycle clubs, so he asked his friends to come with him to find a motorcycle club. He heard that there was a motorcycle club in another country, namely America. It didn't take long for him and his friends to go to America. Rodrigo has arrived in America with his friends and to a city called Los Santos. He and his friends looked for the whereabouts of the motorcycle club but couldn't find it. At night he heard a lot of motorbikes on the streets, and it was a motorcycle club. He and his friend followed the motorcycle club to their destination. The motorcycle club had arrived at their destination, Rodrigo hesitated to approach them, after a few minutes he tried to approach the motorcycle club, he was blocked by several people from the motorcycle club, he was asked what business he had here, Rodrigo answered the question casually. After hearing what Rodrigo said, he was immediately ordered to face their leader. Rodrigo met their leader, after several hours of talking Rodrigo was allowed to enter, he was not fully part of them because he had to go through the stages. After several months he went through the stages, now he is fully part of the motorcycle club, Rodrigo gets a vest that has the name of the motorcycle club written on it. He was completely part of them and often night riding. One night the motorcycle club went somewhere, there was another motorcycle club waiting for them, it turned out to be their rival, after talking, they immediately fought using their bare hands, the fight lasted for 1 hour and was won by the Rodrigo motorcycle club. Questions Character Story Pertama: Tidak Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: KazuKazumi Account Forum yang saya miliki: Notonoel Saya Notonoel selaku pemilik account UCP KazuKazumi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Rodrigo__Malillos) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Neolizer Posted January 7, 2023 Posted January 7, 2023 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$camelot$ Posted January 7, 2023 Author Posted January 7, 2023 1. Tidak 2. 6 bulan - 1 tahun 3. Namchange 4. Tidak, hanya ini 5. Tidak, hanya ini 6. Di rumah
Neolizer Posted January 8, 2023 Posted January 8, 2023 1. Format penulisan belum Justify. 2. Beri jarak antara foto dan awal paragraf. 3. Perhatikan penggunaan huruf kapital dan tanda baca.
Neolizer Posted January 9, 2023 Posted January 9, 2023 On 1/7/2023 at 10:02 PM, Neolizer said: Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Ini masih belum diterapin
$camelot$ Posted January 9, 2023 Author Posted January 9, 2023 7 jam yang lalu, Neolizer said: UCP atas nama Arthurey itu punya siapa? Punya saya, tapi itu sudah di blok
Neolizer Posted January 10, 2023 Posted January 10, 2023 Di block karena apa? Isi CS kamu banyak yang hilang, apalagi formatnya. bagian ini hilang, begitu juga di atas foto hilang nama dan garisnya. Questions Character Story Pertama: Durasi bermain di JG:RP: URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya ... selaku pemilik account UCP ... bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas ... dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$camelot$ Posted January 10, 2023 Author Posted January 10, 2023 Edited. Karena ban evader, @Neolizer
Neolizer Posted January 10, 2023 Posted January 10, 2023 1. Foto taruh di tengah. 2. Ban Evader? berarti kamu melakukan kesalahan disini, masih dalam status banned namun masih bermain menggunakan UCP lain.
$camelot$ Posted January 10, 2023 Author Posted January 10, 2023 gini min, UCP KazuKazumi ini pernah keban karena ngecheat, terus saya buat UCP baru yang Arthurey, UCP yang Arthurey di blok juga karena bukannya request unban UCP KazuKazumi malah buat UCP baru. Saya sudah buat request unban UCP yang saua pake sekarang ini. @Neolizer kalo masih kukurang yakin
Neolizer Posted January 10, 2023 Posted January 10, 2023 Yang permasalahan disini UCP yang Arthurey, sebaiknya kamu buat request unban dulu.
$camelot$ Posted January 11, 2023 Author Posted January 11, 2023 2 jam yang lalu, Neolizer said: Yang permasalahan disini UCP yang Arthurey, sebaiknya kamu buat request unban dulu. buat apa min, udah ga kepake UCP yang itu
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