$Kim Taehyung$ Posted December 29, 2022 Posted December 29, 2022 Salomo_Tashwood One day was born Salomo Tashwood or commonly known as Woody was born on April 17, 2007 in Los Santos. He was born to his mother Sarah Queen and father David Tashwood. Salomo lives with his mother and father in the Jefferson neighborhood. Salomo was a junior high school student, but things didn't go smoothly because he skipped class a lot, he went with his friends to hang out and look for new things. It can be said that he was a bad boy in school and his neighborhood. He has a hobby of making rap lyrics but due to his young age, he is not recognized by the people around him. Salomo's parents were financially well-off, his parents wanted him to be a doctor and a class champion, but he didn't want to be a doctor and felt disappointed because his parents always put pressure on him, it made him not want to go home. After school he immediately looked for playmates around his house and tried new things day after day. Time after time passed, he tried many new things or other juvenile delinquencies such as starting to learn to smoke, getting to know drinking alcohol, and another bad activity. Salomo's life was getting worst by the day. One day a friend of his came to him to invite him to work to distribute drugs around his neighborhood, and lure a lot of money, Salomo immediately did not think long and immediately joined his friend. Solomo's parents did not know about Solomo's life because both parents were busy working. On the July 2022, finally he was expelled from school because he was caught smoking and bad at school. Salomo's parents were very angry with him and eventually he was kicked out of his house. Salomo stayed with his friends and began to live his life, he fell into the dark world at a young age untill now. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Kim Taehyung selaku pemilik account UCP killinglsa bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Salomo_Tashwood) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Northiz Posted December 29, 2022 Posted December 29, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$Kim Taehyung$ Posted December 29, 2022 Author Posted December 29, 2022 1. Tidak 2. 5 Tahun lebih 3. Buat Baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di Rumah
Northiz Posted December 30, 2022 Posted December 30, 2022 Hi @Kim Taehyung, apparently you aren't fullfiled the stipulation that I asked earlier on my first reply, you need to change your story in Justify format and make an indentation at the initial, 5 spaces for every each of paragraph. I also had a question to you: You have an another account, isn't? Please utter all of your UCP accounts that ever you had.
$Kim Taehyung$ Posted December 30, 2022 Author Posted December 30, 2022 9 minutes ago, Northiz said: Hi @Kim Taehyung, apparently you aren't fullfiled the stipulation that I asked earlier on my first reply, you need to change your story in Justify format and make an indentation at the initial, 5 spaces for every each of paragraph. I also had a question to you: You have an another account, isn't? Please utter all of your UCP accounts that ever you had. Thank you for your attention, its already Justify format and I already add some space for each of paragraph. 1. I dont have another UCP, if you check my IP adress and found some UCP, maybe it belonged to my friend who played together at my house at that time.
Northiz Posted December 31, 2022 Posted December 31, 2022 Hi @Kim Taehyung, I received and reviewed your character story, there's an another request from me to your character story: Character Story is usually used a Past Tense on each paragraph, I saw your apply and it seems did not following the criterias. Please fix it up!
$Kim Taehyung$ Posted January 3, 2023 Author Posted January 3, 2023 On 12/31/2022 at 7:05 PM, Northiz said: Hi @Kim Taehyung, I received and reviewed your character story, there's an another request from me to your character story: Character Story is usually used a Past Tense on each paragraph, I saw your apply and it seems did not following the criterias. Please fix it up! Hi @Northiz, I already edited some paragraph, may you check it. Thank you.
Northiz Posted January 3, 2023 Posted January 3, 2023 Accepted, no revision for furthermore and welcome back, Donaciano!
Northiz Posted January 3, 2023 Posted January 3, 2023 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Kim Taehyung, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Northiz JG:RP Helper Team
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