pending Juvencio_Paredes [viscount]

[viscount]

Juvencio Paredes

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     In mid-1980, a family resided in Cali, Colombia. The family was blessed with a son and gave him the name Juvencio Paredes. Juvencio Paredes is a child who, since childhood, has been in an environment of criminality, moral decay, and violence. Growing up in a family that could be said to have financial shortages and working under Cartel Cali, Juvencio has done several jobs for Cartel Cali, such as delivering drug packages, burglary, and murder, to make his living. In short, Juvencio had grown up and was still working under Cartel Cali to do some work, Juvencio, who already knew the illegal side of Cartel Cali, was recruited to be part of Cartel Cali. Due to financial pressures and the trust placed in him, Juvencio ended up working on The Poison Crew, where the crew worked to carry out large-scale narcotics deliveries and murder.

     Juvencio was appointed chairman of The Poison Crew after working for Cartel Cali in The Poison Crew for a long time. The crew performed admirably and completed some Cartel Cali work. Juvencio, who at that time was playing a prank, committed the murder of one of the members of the Cali Cartel because he was considered to have betrayed the Cali Cartel. When Juvencio carried out his actions, he was caught off guard by one of the Cartel Cali members, who was pointing a gun from behind. When he was discovered by another Cartel Cali member, Juvencio inevitably killed the person and succeeded in kidnapping the Cartel Cali member. Juvencio takes him to an abandoned warehouse and carries out his actions. Unfortunately, the action must be stopped because Juvencio has been followed by detectives, Juvencio is finally caught for attempted murder. Juvencio was sentenced to 10 years' imprisonment and a fine of twenty million dollars.

 

     10 years have passed. Juvencio has been released from prison after serving a long prison term. Juvencio, who is still working for the Cali Cartel, returns to his activities, and Juvencio finds out that the person who ordered him apparently framed Juvencio. Juvencio, who was annoyed by this action, looked for this person until he finally met him. Juvencio also asked to meet with this person and had a lot of conversation. Juvencio, who was already annoyed, immediately kidnapped the person and took him to the same warehouse where he was arrested. In his anger, Juvencio pushed the Cali Cartel member to the ground and aimed his gun. Without further ado, Juvencio immediately shot the Cali Cartel member and left his body in the warehouse. Juvencio, who returned to "El Jefe" from the Cali Cartel, asked for a fake passport so he could go to Los Santos and start a Cali Cartel connection.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
viscount

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

@viscount

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Saya viscount selaku pemilik account UCP viscount bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Juvencio Paredes) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited December 30, 2022 by viscount

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[viscount]

1. Ya.

2. Kurang dari 1 bulan.

3. Baru saya buat.

4. Tidak.

5. Tidak.

6. Di warnet.
@EGOITICS
 

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5 hours ago, viscount said:

1. Ya.

2. Kurang dari 1 bulan.

3. Baru saya buat.

4. Tidak.

5. Tidak.

6. Di warnet.
@EGOITICS
 

 

Berikut poin-poin revisi yang harus kamu ikuti dengan baik:

• Dibikin 3 paragraf.
• Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
• Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
• Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
• Jika ada kesalahan penulisan atau typo, harap langsung diubah.
• Jarak antara foto dan judul jangan terlalu, dan pastikan foto kamu benar-benar di tengah.
• Setiap awal paragraf kasih 5 spasi agar menjorok kekanan.

Harap dibaca dengan teliti, agar cepat beres.

[viscount]

Fixed, dapat di revisi kembali. @EGOITICS

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On 12/29/2022 at 3:32 AM, viscount said:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Isi ini dengan nama UCP kamu.

[viscount]

15 hours ago, EGOITICS said:

 

Isi ini dengan nama UCP kamu.

Fixed, silakan di revisi bila ada.

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Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @viscount,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@EGOITICS
JG:RP Helper Team