scoobawissen Posted December 26, 2022 Posted December 26, 2022 (edited) Draymend Lafayette Draymend Lafayette was a baby that was born in the remote town of Inglewood in the western U.S. state of California. Draymend Lafayette was born with very sufficient family financial conditions, even Draymend's family was very able to buy that what Draymend's needs when he was a baby. Draymend is the second child of three children, he has a younger brother named Armani Pelayo, and an older brother named Jason Inge, when Draymend was five years old his brother was arrested by Los Angeles police and entered on the news page of the city of Inglewood. Draymend's mother, who learned of the embarrassing incident where she saw Jason Inge's face cleanly visible on her home television, after she saw the television, she immediately blamed her father Draymend for giving up her son too much to get along with. Months after the incident, Draymend's mother and father decided to divorce, they separated and began their own lives. Draymend followed his father to continue their lives, in contrast to Armani he followed his mother. After a few weeks, Draymend was schooled by his father at the age of 8. By the age of 16, Draymend's father died after being robbed at a local market store around his home, Draymend witnessed the incident and saw his father was covered in blood on his shirt and around his chest part. A year after the incident, Draymend was very addicted to drugs because he had bought them from his friend in other words to relieve the stress, he suffered to live his own life. But Draymend did not dissolve too late with his grief, he looked for his younger brother, Armani Pelayo, in the vicinity of Idlewood housing project, in the city of Los Santos, after a few weeks he managed to find his younger brother Armani. After a few months, Draymend became an official member of Seven Hunnid Piru. He earned the nickname as Quarter Pound number one from the other official's gang after he been putted on for an active gang member. For Half a year he lived around Brystal Garden known as his gang turf, Draymend got his job to circulating drugs from Lil Flag number two, known as drug traffickers, until now Draymend Lafayette became an active member of Seven Hunnid Gang. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: IkallGanteng Saya scoobawissen selaku pemilik account UCP IkallHensem bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Draymend Lafayette) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited December 26, 2022 by scoobawissen
iamcollapse Posted December 26, 2022 Posted December 26, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
scoobawissen Posted December 26, 2022 Author Posted December 26, 2022 4 minutes ago, EGOITICS said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Baik min saya sedia menjawab pertanyaan tersebut. 1. Tidak 2. 6-1 tahun 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak 5. Iya @IkallGanteng, lupa gmail & password 6. Warnet, laptop saya rusak
iamcollapse Posted December 26, 2022 Posted December 26, 2022 Berikut poin revisi yang harus kamu ubah: Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Harap kasih 5 spasi disetiap awal paragraf, biar menjorok kekanan. Jawab dengan sejujur mungkin, Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini?
scoobawissen Posted December 27, 2022 Author Posted December 27, 2022 (edited) 8 hours ago, EGOITICS said: Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Harap kasih 5 spasi disetiap awal paragraf, biar menjorok kekanan. Jawab dengan sejujur mungkin, Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Siap sudah mint, jikalau ada yang salah tolong direply kembali. • Hanya ucp ini yang saya mainkan, saya bermain di warnet mint, kadang berbeda tempat juga, berkemungkinan ada IP nyangkut. Edited December 27, 2022 by scoobawissen
iamcollapse Posted December 27, 2022 Posted December 27, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @scoobawissen, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @EGOITICS JG:RP Helper Team
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