Ratditya eka saputra Posted December 13, 2022 Posted December 13, 2022 Ladzrigo_Julious On July 14, 1992 a child was born from Mexico who was in the city of Campeche he was named Ladzrigo Julious or commonly called Drigo, he had a dad named Demian Julious and his mom who had died named Sayindrina Margaretta, Drigo himself had an interest in motorbikes because his dad is a member of a motorcycle club called Salventaz MC, but Drigo also has a selfish nature and is never afraid of anyone. One day when he entered high school at Campeche school, he had talents such as playing soccer to playing basketball but he was almost expelled from school because he had injured his friend but when Drigo was eating in the canteen he met a friend who named Desbertta he is a child who also has an interest in motorbikes and the two of them become very close friends. And when Drigo had graduated from high school, Drigo and his close friend decided to build a custom motorcycle garage called Parsenqueen Garage, so many visitors came to the place that his friend thought of making a motorcycle club with his friend, at first Drigo was very doubted but Drigo agreed to his friend's wish after that, Drigo and his friend called someone who was also a loyal customer of their motorcycle custom place and in the end they designed the name for the motorcycle club. Smoothly but Jalvaenta MC had a conflict with another motorcycle club so Jalvaenta MC almost fell and made Jalvaenta MC plunge into the illegal world. Until Jalvaenta MC decided to sell cocaine and marijuana to improve his club's finances until the police caught them and in the end they were jailed for about 5 years after intermittently Drigo was in prison he was finally free, but Drigo decided to go to Los Santos and look for work there until in the end Drigo went to blueberries to get a job as a mechanic and also Drigo again decided to enter a motorcycle club because of his hobby it's Drigo getting a lot of brothers. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/214332-niguel_cotrez-ekasaputra/#comment-2074101 Account UCP yang saya miliki: ekasaputra Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Ratditya eka saputra Saya Ratditya eka saputra selaku pemilik account UCP ekasaputra bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Ladzrigo_Julious) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Northiz Posted December 13, 2022 Posted December 13, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Ratditya eka saputra Posted December 13, 2022 Author Posted December 13, 2022 2 jam yang lalu, Northiz said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? (1 tahun lebih) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah)
Northiz Posted December 14, 2022 Posted December 14, 2022 Hi @Ratditya eka saputra, I have reviewed your character story and it almost fullfiled the criterias but I think you have to making a revision on the sentence, let's fix it up: Spoiler 17 hours ago, Ratditya eka saputra said: On July 14, 1992 a child was born from Mexico who was in the city of Campeche he was named Ladzrigo Julious or commonly called Drigo, he had a dad named Demian Julious and his mom who had died named Sayindrina Margaretta, Drigo himself had an interest in motorbikes because his dad is a member of a motorcycle club called Salventaz MC, but Drigo also has a selfish nature and is never afraid of anyone one (One) day when he entered high school at Campeche school, he had talents such as playing soccer to playing basketball but he was almost expelled from school because he had injured his friend but when Drigo was eating in the canteen he met a friend who named Desbertta he is a child who also has an interest in motorbikes and the two of them become very close friends. And when Drigo had graduated from high school, Drigo and his close friend decided to build a custom motorcycle garage called Parsenqueen Garage, so many visitors came to the place that his friend thought of making a motorcycle club with his friend, at first Drigo was very doubted but Drigo agreed to his friend's wish after that, Drigo and his friend called someone who was also a loyal customer of their motorcycle custom place and in the end they designed the name for the motorcycle club. smoothly but Jalvaenta MC had a conflict with another motorcycle club so Jalvaenta MC almost fell and made Jalvaenta MC plunge into the illegal world. Until Jalvaenta MC decided to sell cocaine and marijuana to improve his club's finances until the police caught them and in the end they were jailed for about 5 years after intermittently Drigo was in prison he was finally free, but Drigo decided to go to Los Santos and look for work there until in the end Drigo went to blueberries to get a job as a mechanic and also Drigo again decided to enter a motorcycle club because of his hobby it's Drigo getting a lot of brothers. Note(s) Bold-ed text means shall adding a word or change to highlight sentence on the paragraph. Red background means shall adding a punctuation dot (.) before writing new sentences.
Ratditya eka saputra Posted December 14, 2022 Author Posted December 14, 2022 45 minutes ago, Northiz said: Hi @Ratditya eka saputra, I have reviewed your character story and it almost fullfiled the criterias but I think you have to making a revision on the sentence, let's fix it up: Hide contents Note(s) Bold-ed text means shall adding a word or change to highlight sentence on the paragraph. Red background means shall adding a punctuation dot (.) before writing new sentences. Done min
Northiz Posted December 14, 2022 Posted December 14, 2022 5 hours ago, Northiz said: Red background means shall adding a punctuation dot (.) before writing new sentences. It is not over, please be careful to revision your character story.
Ratditya eka saputra Posted December 14, 2022 Author Posted December 14, 2022 2 jam yang lalu, Northiz said: It is not over, please be careful to revision your character story. I've already
Northiz Posted December 15, 2022 Posted December 15, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Ratditya eka saputra, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Northiz JG:RP Helper Team
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